Serenity...

Water Flowing Love...

Serenity...

My love for you waterfalls from the high mountain slope
it forms a pool of serenity below awaiting us to elope,

I have only you in my future sights
you and you only are my true and lovely delight,

As the streaming water gently flows
my love for you only grows and grows,

My desire to wife you is as true as
the water is blue and to you I want to remain glued,

Today, tomorrow and forever, I want so much
for you to join me in all endeavors,

I want our love to over flow like water into the ocean
so when we visit our favorite beach we can bottle
our love potion,

This I am positive of what I want and truly need
you my love, when you're not with me my heart
only bleeds,

Let us take this leap of faith off this slope to the
coolness of serenity awaiting us below
completely submitting and seizing control,

We will allow God to seal our fate and deliver it
on a silver platter or better yet a golden plate
today we can start our lives together with a clean slate,

Come my love and join me in serenity
I promise to love you for infinity...

Author's Note

God always provides:)

Reviews

[wordman]

a beautiful love poem full of sentiment vivid colors

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[wordman]

you are welcome my friend

[Etta Beasley]

Beautiful ☺ when you find her she'll be awfully lucky to have wonderfully written poetry about her.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!, b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write Jamestown and loved the line " we can bottle our love potion" classic line! Enjoy your writes my friend , now go and join her quick!

[Jamestown]

Just writing for now:( Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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You know what you want, you've told her how she makes you feel, you want to make sure you do right by her and God... seems like it's all in order my friend. Nicely done!

[Jamestown]

Just writing for now, but my day will come:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[....................]

It all has to start somewhere... you know the old saying: fail to plan; plan to fail... at least you have it written down :)

[Jamestown]

GOOD CALL:)

[Matching Socks]

So lovely JT. Wonderful poetry.
Check the 3rd stanza. Double 'the'
Good job here.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, much appreciated, b-blessed!

[Matching Socks]

My pleasures.

[Matching Socks]

Oops, pleasure. Singular! Lol.

[sereenaoutloud]

Sorry if i keep repeating myself but this is just beautiful and romantic. I love the Imagery you create, from the flowing water, its serenity pool below, the slopes and taking a leap of faith! What a romantic journey!
loved it!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, always means a ton:)
b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

Such a great poem of love and devotion. Your love was expressed well in this piece.
A great write from your heart/

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!