Serenity...

Water Flowing Love...

Serenity...

My love for you waterfalls from the high mountain slope
it forms a pool of serenity below awaiting us to elope,

I have only you in my future sights
you and you only are my true and lovely delight,

As the streaming water gently flows
my love for you only grows and grows,

My desire to wife you is as true as
the water is blue and to you I want to remain glued,

Today, tomorrow and forever, I want so much
for you to join me in all endeavors,

I want our love to over flow like water into the ocean
so when we visit our favorite beach we can bottle
our love potion,

This I am positive of what I want and truly need
you my love, when you're not with me my heart
only bleeds,

Let us take this leap of faith off this slope to the
coolness of serenity awaiting us below
completely submitting and seizing control,

We will allow God to seal our fate and deliver it
on a silver platter or better yet a golden plate
today we can start our lives together with a clean slate,

Come my love and join me in serenity
I promise to love you for infinity...

Author's Note

God always provides:)

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Jamestown. Great writing. I have never seen waterfalls as a verb before, but oh how perfect is that image!! From there right to that last couplet, your words flowed and gave shivers!! alf

[Jamestown]

Means a ton alf:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[nazia]

You have written such lovely romantic piece its impossible not to fall in love with this piece. Great write :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, "waterfalls" as a verb...nicely done...and "wife you"
such great phrasing in this...this is infinitely romantic.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[~]

You are in a romantic mood ~ it is beautiful to read all these lovely romantic poems. I liked the aa bb.. rhyme scheme. Awesome series of couplets. Blessings to your creativity my friend!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[~]

always welcome!!!

[Ana B.]

oh man, absolutely love this most romantic and emotion-full little masterpiece....and '' Serene'' is one of my favourite words....Stunning writing :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend that means a ton! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Gee]

A classy,romantic write JT,sweet

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

This is truly a beautiful poem, with a soft and genuine expression. This poem flows so freely and naturally, I love this side of you as a writer!
Whoever this woman may be, she is very lucky!

[Jamestown]

Very sweet U R my friend, much appreciated:)
Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

My pleasure! This one goes into the favourite folder :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend:)

[Madhu]

This is such a masterpiece! It's so well elaborated and perfectly rhymed. I love it! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

so romantic and sweet............
very beautifully written.....
i loved it Sir!!
may God bless you with love and both with happiness!!!
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome Sir!!! :) :)

[E G TEN]

Very well put, a romantic poet at its finest" thanks for sharing and All the best! ;)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!