Serenity...

Water Flowing Love...

Serenity...

My love for you waterfalls from the high mountain slope
it forms a pool of serenity below awaiting us to elope,

I have only you in my future sights
you and you only are my true and lovely delight,

As the streaming water gently flows
my love for you only grows and grows,

My desire to wife you is as true as
the water is blue and to you I want to remain glued,

Today, tomorrow and forever, I want so much
for you to join me in all endeavors,

I want our love to over flow like water into the ocean
so when we visit our favorite beach we can bottle
our love potion,

This I am positive of what I want and truly need
you my love, when you're not with me my heart
only bleeds,

Let us take this leap of faith off this slope to the
coolness of serenity awaiting us below
completely submitting and seizing control,

We will allow God to seal our fate and deliver it
on a silver platter or better yet a golden plate
today we can start our lives together with a clean slate,

Come my love and join me in serenity
I promise to love you for infinity...

Author's Note

God always provides:)

Reviews

[nwachukwu michael anene]

sight delight,flows glows,need bleed,plate slate,serenity infinity.i love your rhymes as piercing into the wounds healing and bringing the theme supremacy of God.bravo

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Very nice write. I pray that she says YES. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Me too when that day comes, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Einahpets2012]

B-e-a-utiful, just beautiful! I love it you can feel the emotion and compassion in this poem. Stay blessed

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Joy]

That's so good... Keep it up...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[KelWriter]

beautiful poem. I admire the way you always seed your faith into your poems and reference God even in your writing. It truly is inspiring. While it's not exactly my writing style to always explicitly do so, I share the respect and feeling. Thanks for sharing this!!!

[Jamestown]

That means a ton, I appreciate it:)Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Perkele.7885]

It is a poem written for an eternal love affair. Serenity, is a very peaceful and desirable circumstance. God does provide to those that surrender to Him. This a very solid write. I enjoyed it!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Nini]

Very beautiful and nicely written.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful, as love is. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[RiverRei]

Lovely as always Jamestown. You definitely have a way with words. I know this isn't geared towards me, but I would definitely be up for eloping if you had written it for me haha. :P

[Jamestown]

What a sweet gesture, I appreciate your kind review!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed! PTL

[RiverRei]

Anytime, my friend! :)

[Olumegbon]

Nice one my friend, great writing, really enjoyed it. thanks for sharing

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!