Serenity...

Water Flowing Love...

Serenity...

My love for you waterfalls from the high mountain slope
it forms a pool of serenity below awaiting us to elope,

I have only you in my future sights
you and you only are my true and lovely delight,

As the streaming water gently flows
my love for you only grows and grows,

My desire to wife you is as true as
the water is blue and to you I want to remain glued,

Today, tomorrow and forever, I want so much
for you to join me in all endeavors,

I want our love to over flow like water into the ocean
so when we visit our favorite beach we can bottle
our love potion,

This I am positive of what I want and truly need
you my love, when you're not with me my heart
only bleeds,

Let us take this leap of faith off this slope to the
coolness of serenity awaiting us below
completely submitting and seizing control,

We will allow God to seal our fate and deliver it
on a silver platter or better yet a golden plate
today we can start our lives together with a clean slate,

Come my love and join me in serenity
I promise to love you for infinity...

Author's Note

God always provides:)

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Such romantic and lovely couplets. Filled with hope for the future. Sweet write. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Shawna]

Beautiful, peaceful, and lovely! :) Excellent job!

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely, heartfelt sentiments.
Especially enjoyed: "I want our love to overflow like water into the ocean
so when we visit our favorite beach we can bottle
our love potion."
Very pleasant read, J!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[I Am Svetlana]

I really love the beauty and desire in this piece. It read to me like wedding vows. So precise. I sure would love to hear something like this on my big day from someone who actually cares. I'll probably write a poem for my vows anyway...since I don't feel like writing a novel. Haha. Great piece!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

It's nice to see how your writings are getting better every time. Another wonderful piece full of palpable emotions. Thanks for sharing! :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome :-)

[free will]

A really nice way to express the love of a couple and how we want someone to love and to be loved and support each other through the journey of life. Well done James

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a very sweet poem, and I think you chose the title perfectly.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

This was a serene waterfall to my ears, full of love and peace, passion and affection and eternal togetherness.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[Ruth]

Beautiful, the heart flows with warmth here!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[R Smith]

well done James, here's hoping all your desires come true, excellent work :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!