Oceans Edge...

Oceans Edge...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Laguna Beach family outing...

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Oceans Edge...

Laguna Beach,
Crystal Cove, 10am is when we arrived
the family and I are excited and feeling alive,

Today we will spend the day having fun in the sun
at the oceans edge, with no cares in the world is what
we pledge,

The day is one of those days that God has finger printed
perfect weather, soft warm sand, and a non-crowded beach
a great memory in the making, for the families taking,

And take it we surely did, at the oceans edge we laid, played, prayed,
and watched the gorgeous ocean smack the rocks as it sprayed,

With ear to ear smiles and laughter full of light
I knew this is all Gods glory always keeping him in sight,

As the family continues to enjoy themselves at the oceans
edge, I take a moment to write "JESUS " in the sand acknowledge
my King first hand, if people view it that's fine with me
but certainly not part of my plan, I just want to say " thank you "
for this unbelievable day that I will cherish and tuck away to
relive on a Colorado snowy day,

With that being said, we indulged ourselves in this piece of
heaven and accepted this blessing, the day couldn't have gone
any better, and that's why we all knew that this was Gods
will to enjoy this day and be all together,

We made a memory that will last forever for all of us,
and we give God all praise and glory, for him we will
always love and trust, whether it be in everyday life
or at the oceans edge...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
GOD IS GOOD!!!

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I love this my friend I have never been to a real beach tho I bet it is beautiful anyways thank you for sharing 😊

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
Sounds fun , amen to that. With send read request. Dude . I said I was over at blog and my twitter. O have made a discovery dating back to 1963 going to now 2015 , who knows how far future only God will send read request
I am being followed by my police up to the u n
Keep me in your prayers


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Will do, b-blessed!
"We made a memory that will last forever for all of us,
and we give God all praise and glory, for him we will
always love and trust, whether it be in everyday life
or at the oceans edge... "
I really like this part. This is a sweet narrative poem .


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
Sweet poem bro, glad to hear it was a glorious day! =D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and, yes awesome day no doubt:)
B blessed.
Such a warm piece for this slowly moving spring. I enjoyed this James: a great write in memory of a family event and a wonderful thanks to the Creator. Well-done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL:)

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Jamestown
Jamestown

Denver, CO



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