Oceans Edge...

Laguna Beach family outing...

Oceans Edge...

Laguna Beach,
Crystal Cove, 10am is when we arrived
the family and I are excited and feeling alive,

Today we will spend the day having fun in the sun
at the oceans edge, with no cares in the world is what
we pledge,

The day is one of those days that God has finger printed
perfect weather, soft warm sand, and a non-crowded beach
a great memory in the making, for the families taking,

And take it we surely did, at the oceans edge we laid, played, prayed,
and watched the gorgeous ocean smack the rocks as it sprayed,

With ear to ear smiles and laughter full of light
I knew this is all Gods glory always keeping him in sight,

As the family continues to enjoy themselves at the oceans
edge, I take a moment to write "JESUS " in the sand acknowledge
my King first hand, if people view it that's fine with me
but certainly not part of my plan, I just want to say " thank you "
for this unbelievable day that I will cherish and tuck away to
relive on a Colorado snowy day,

With that being said, we indulged ourselves in this piece of
heaven and accepted this blessing, the day couldn't have gone
any better, and that's why we all knew that this was Gods
will to enjoy this day and be all together,

We made a memory that will last forever for all of us,
and we give God all praise and glory, for him we will
always love and trust, whether it be in everyday life
or at the oceans edge...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!!!

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I felt like I was living the day with you! Thank you for sharing the beauty and glory of nature and God. It felt lifelike.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Gee]

Lol,I'm scarred forever!!!

[E G TEN]

Very nice written my friend, brings joy to my heart while I'm reading it" Godspeed to you and your family! ;)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[alf]

Hi Jamestown. What a truly great write!!! Loved the story, the internal rhymes and the easy way in which this seemed to drip from the pen. Loved the family day, and yet had time for giving thanks above. Alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful poem about beautiful memories........sounds like a lot of fun.
i loved it Sir!!!
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome Sir!! :) :)

[wordman]

sounds like a beautiful day to make memories,good for you

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL

[W R Stowe]

The pacific ocean is one of God's most serene and beautiful places I've ever seen.When my wife comes I will fly to LA and meet her stay in Huntington Beach for two days and take an Amtrak back to Ohio

Bill

[Jamestown]

I don't blame you one bit, Huntington beach is my favorite, but so darn
crowded, it's everyone's favorite, home of the triple crown event,thanks for
checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

We're going to dine at Rubies out on the pier ever go there

[Jamestown]

That's the ticket Bill:)

[W R Stowe]

you bet your lifesaver

[~]

A most lovely write. I love that place. It is very fortunate that we live so close to all these blessings. I hope you applied plenty of sunscreen. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, no sun screen for me my mother blessed me with
her skin we don't burn often, we're brownie bears lol:) Thanks again and b-blessed!

[~]

LOL at brownie bears.. ahhh that is a blessing indeed!

[Melinda McQueen]

How sweet it is... to write about a lovely memory. I like the story told...... and how much you love your family is precious.
A great write.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Work to be proud of, Jamestown.
Didn't just read this poem, I experienced it!
Thanks for the mental oasis.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[sereenaoutloud]

What a gorgeous piece. IT actually made me feel all calm as i was reading it. Flowing so beautifully like the ocean breeze. You recaptured a great memory in this piece. Loved it, great write James!

[Jamestown]

You are so kind my dear friend, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[sereenaoutloud]

not at all you are very talented. I think i say it every time i read you writes and feel i repeat myself, but your rhythm and rhyme flow effortlessly!