Oceans Edge...

Oceans Edge...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Laguna Beach family outing...

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Oceans Edge...

Laguna Beach,
Crystal Cove, 10am is when we arrived
the family and I are excited and feeling alive,

Today we will spend the day having fun in the sun
at the oceans edge, with no cares in the world is what
we pledge,

The day is one of those days that God has finger printed
perfect weather, soft warm sand, and a non-crowded beach
a great memory in the making, for the families taking,

And take it we surely did, at the oceans edge we laid, played, prayed,
and watched the gorgeous ocean smack the rocks as it sprayed,

With ear to ear smiles and laughter full of light
I knew this is all Gods glory always keeping him in sight,

As the family continues to enjoy themselves at the oceans
edge, I take a moment to write "JESUS " in the sand acknowledge
my King first hand, if people view it that's fine with me
but certainly not part of my plan, I just want to say " thank you "
for this unbelievable day that I will cherish and tuck away to
relive on a Colorado snowy day,

With that being said, we indulged ourselves in this piece of
heaven and accepted this blessing, the day couldn't have gone
any better, and that's why we all knew that this was Gods
will to enjoy this day and be all together,

We made a memory that will last forever for all of us,
and we give God all praise and glory, for him we will
always love and trust, whether it be in everyday life
or at the oceans edge...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
GOD IS GOOD!!!

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What beautiful, lifting words of glory and honor to God... His creation so alive and filled with joy... I lived a few years in Costa Mesa... truly miss the ocean... the peace that rolls in with each wave...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Beautiful review, Costa Mesa one day I will get there, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This warmed up a cold Belfast day JT. Thanks for sharing this one ! :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!
Beautiful piece James! And now I wanna go to the beach! lol.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A beautiful piece of a whispy dream, i love poems about ocean.....it's a beauty and a miracle if eyes get to behold a sight like this. Wonderul poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I could imagine it all! Thank you for sharing such beautiful writings :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

My sweet, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Beautiful memories can always bring a smile to our soul James... Ioved this piece. Once again brother a great poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Great time at the beach, quality time with the family, I can see before my eyes. Very nice poem, James. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A lovely memory worth a life time. every thing, every image is so serene, its soothes the reader. :)
Well written dear :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Beautiful imagery filled writing! My mind was carried to a joyful serene world that it always wishes to be in. Great job james :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, my unbelievably talented friend, I appreciate it
b-blessed!
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You painted the picture perfectly JT,only trouble is I now have a picture of you in my mind in a fluorescent green mankini........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out friend and it was baby blue get it right
gosh:) lol b-blessed!

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