Oceans Edge...

Laguna Beach family outing...

Oceans Edge...

Laguna Beach,
Crystal Cove, 10am is when we arrived
the family and I are excited and feeling alive,

Today we will spend the day having fun in the sun
at the oceans edge, with no cares in the world is what
we pledge,

The day is one of those days that God has finger printed
perfect weather, soft warm sand, and a non-crowded beach
a great memory in the making, for the families taking,

And take it we surely did, at the oceans edge we laid, played, prayed,
and watched the gorgeous ocean smack the rocks as it sprayed,

With ear to ear smiles and laughter full of light
I knew this is all Gods glory always keeping him in sight,

As the family continues to enjoy themselves at the oceans
edge, I take a moment to write "JESUS " in the sand acknowledge
my King first hand, if people view it that's fine with me
but certainly not part of my plan, I just want to say " thank you "
for this unbelievable day that I will cherish and tuck away to
relive on a Colorado snowy day,

With that being said, we indulged ourselves in this piece of
heaven and accepted this blessing, the day couldn't have gone
any better, and that's why we all knew that this was Gods
will to enjoy this day and be all together,

We made a memory that will last forever for all of us,
and we give God all praise and glory, for him we will
always love and trust, whether it be in everyday life
or at the oceans edge...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!!!

Reviews

[Melissa Padilla]

I enjoyed reading this :) Sometimes, us people forget about how gorgeous life is and how God is always blessing us and bringing us a happy and sincere smile every day.

[Jamestown]

U R totally right:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[RiverRei]

"the family and I are exited and feeling alive"...did you mean, "the family and I are excited and feeling alive"?

I really liked this. The flow was good, but seemed a bit choppy at times. I liked the rhyming once in a while, it actually fit really well with the non-rhyming parts. I think this is a memory that (hopefully) everyone can relate to. It definitely made me think back to times on the beach with my family and miss them. Living with a great lake in between my family and me makes like a little more lonely and a little harder to handle. This made me miss them a little more lol. Time for another visit I think! Thank you for sharing this and bringing joy to my heart with the memories that it brought back for me :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, b-blessed!

[R Smith]

Sounds beautiful my friend, glad you had this day so good, people like yourself deserve the best there is, bless yourself and family too :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[closed]

A very quaint literary snapshot of life

thanks for sharing with us Jamestown



-Dream

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[J.R.H.]

Awesome poem. Loved the glory you put into a nice day with the family. Shows your heart and your skill.

only change - perhaps, take out the word 'with' in

with no cares in the world is what
we pledge,

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints:)b-blessed !

[Lizardo]

True, I love the days when God just makes you feel happy and everything in the day seems so... perfect in a way we can't understand. Good write James, May god always be with you my friend, you're a great man

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we aren't often enough thankful, or thankful enough for the beautiful days and beautiful scenery to enjoy....or the wonderful company with which we share that beauty.

nicely expressed.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

I live just a few miles up the beach from Crystal Cove. It is one of my favorite places to spend the day...the soft sand, watching the tiny crabs scamper across the rocks... I'm thrilled you made some great memories. You have left me feeling quite blessed to be able to enjoy this beauty everyday.
There are times when I forget - Thank you for the reminder!

:) Julie

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Jamestown I feel like I shared your family day . Precious days they are my friend. A nice write

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Next time you go down there and we meet bring some beers with you lol;)

[Double T]

This is the pefect example of being a family. I can complety identify with that tone. You have done a great deal of work James Town.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!