Space for Rent...

Future plans...

Space for Rent...

As lady love has rented
a space in my mind,

I plan on taking up permanent
residency in her heart,

Which will lead us to break her
lease and move to the city
to purchase a home,

Home is where the
heart is...

Author's Note

God is good!!!

Reviews

[Deepika]

Aww..adorable words! I really enjoyed reading, specially the first 2 pair of lines:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Double T]

The poem has a really good heart to its theme. I like it a lot because you really now how to bring out the emotion in people.

We may not see the future, but that doesn't mean we should be prepared for it. Bravo Jamestown.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana D S M]

Aww, I love it. :)
You've got a loving heart, may your dreams come true!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana D S M]

You're welcome!

[ANTO]

Thats an interesting strategy JT, squat in the heart of the squatter - hmmm.
Very intriguing perspective on romantic Love.
Thanks for the RR mate !
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[gorillarock]

NICE! Short, incredibly sweet, beautifully to the point!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[stansg]

Good one JT, a bit different from what you usually write but fantastic anyways.
I like the the last line: Home is where the heart is at...
I can really connect with this because I've been living away from home for quite some time now, and sometimes i feel that even though I'm here physically my heart is still back home.

For where your treasure is, there will your heart be also.
Matt 6:21
Praise the Lord.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

awwww that was so sweet! i like how you make renting out space and love work flawlessly together.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[nazia]

How romantic and beautiful.. The best place to live is in someone's heart... Eloquent :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I love the ending of this piece. Like what I believe, I am home in the arms of my love. I have this poem in this link entitled I AM HOME
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hearmymind/1346675/

Short but well-done!

[Jamestown]

Well thank you for checking it out and b-blessed!