Space for Rent...

Space for Rent...

A Poem by Jamestown
"

Future plans...

"
Space for Rent...

As lady love has rented
a space in my mind,

I plan on taking up permanent
residency in her heart,

Which will lead us to break her
lease and move to the city
to purchase a home,

Home is where the
heart is...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
God is good!!!

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Short and lovely poem Jamestown

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
It is a very warm little piece of poem. Delicate and faithful. Bravo! :D

Kami :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Love this, beautiful piece, and the reviews are right amazing metaphor!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
my only suggestion is to leave off the "at" on the last line...

but wow...excellent metaphor carried from beginning to end of this poem that the reader gets to temporarily live in with sub-lease.

nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, edit as we speak:)
B-blessed!
Don't know about you but my home is beyond the confines of this earth its in God's heart and when we get married and become one in love and place this love within the heart of God

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Amen! Hope you enjoyed the write! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

Yea was good write brother God bless

Bill
A beautifully moving piece James; to take up permanent residence in another's heart - wonderful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!
What a creative piece of writing. Liked this!! :)



Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This kind of made me smile, moving a bit faster are we. Be careful. God is good...all of the time. Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Not moving at all, just writing:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
a creativwrite,space for rent

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
That's a lovely writing Jimmy,
i loved the idea.
Very well done.

armin. ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL

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Jamestown
Jamestown

Denver, CO



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