Space for Rent...

A Poem by Jamestown

Future plans...

Space for Rent...

As lady love has rented
a space in my mind,

I plan on taking up permanent
residency in her heart,

Which will lead us to break her
lease and move to the city
to purchase a home,

Home is where the
heart is...

© 2015 Jamestown

Author's Note

God is good!!!

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Sami Khalil

Best of luck for both. May the space of the heart become one and spacial after that...Bravo, sir...Be BLessed...:)........

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................

SmittyJas

Loved it home is where the heart takes residents and grows in warmths and love.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

Sindu

Wow!! So incredibly sweet, James! I bet she will be one lucky and well loved woman :)
I love this.. So simple but full enough.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

That so right, home is where the heart is. Very well said, James. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

free will

I like this, it made me smile :) all the best for you & your lady love!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

EmmaELJ2001

I found this to be very inspiring

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

Olivia

able to write a complex poem in only 10 lines. Maybe I'm a little jealous. nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL!

RattyAdalan

Amazing point- "Home is where the heart is..." - it's really true! Poem of minimalism but it's good write and nice to read. I agreed with Terrence Chang. Regards :)