Digging for Love...

Digging for Love...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Dig4Love...

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Digging for Love...

As I start to dig deep into my heart, l pass by several emotions that
are tucked in small dark spaces that my eyes can't see,

I know that they are there, but the hiding spots they have selected,
are deliberate and well thought out, I can feel them but only when they
allow me to,

I lock on to one and begin to pick and pry at it trying to jar it lose,
as I loosen it from its mold, I get a sharp pain in my heart as if I am
being stabbed and my eyes flood with tears, I step back and take a look
at it and realize, the emotion that is now free of it's crevice is
that of HATE,

Now that this beast is no longer hiding, other emotions want to also
surface and rear their ugly heads, like sadness, anger and several others,
which is bringing me to a state of complete exhaustion,

I can feel myself losing control of the situation and am terrified
that I may cause my heart to attack itself, I look around in desperation
praying I can find LOVE to come to the rescue, sure enough I see
love's beautiful light shinning through what looks like a tunnel of some sort,

I eventually make my way to it and when I do, HATE and the other negative
emotions burrow themselves back into there caves,
and a warm soothing feeling cascades throughout my body and my energy
returns immediately,

The feeling of complete freedom comes over me and my mind feels clear
as a sparkling crystal, I now have a total understanding of why, darkness is
represented by HATE and LOVE to light, they absolutely feel how they appear,
LOVE is warm and bright and HATE is dark and cold, and I also learned the difference,
in physical and mental clarity depending on what emotion is at the forefront of my thoughts,

So I beg you all, please stay positive, don't let negativity dictate your life
and never stop digging for LOVE...

© 2015 Jamestown


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How true this is. We all have both sides inside of our hearts, perhaps fate plays too much of a part in our choices. Happiness comes from within. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

I agree:) thx for checking it out and b-blessed!
Such an uplifting write, James. You are in a good place in life...you are so wise. May you always have love in your life, my friend. lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind words, b-blessed!
"The feeling of complete freedom comes over me and my mind feels clear
as a sparkling crystal, I now have a total understanding of why, darkness is
represented by HATE and LOVE to light,"

Your feelings are in the right place and order. Your positivism is superb. An outstanding write...:)...........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks kind sir, for stopping by and checking it out much appreciated
be blessed!
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:).....................
I really like how you 'remove' hate from the heart and let it sit there for all to see. Putting it on display to let Love deal with it is a powerful image. Love, the greatest of all emptions, and certainly the most powerful if we can find it, secure it and exude it. Great write James!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I feel convicted, , thanks my friend PTL
I'm really loving and feeling this one. You've done a great job sending a truthful message :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Was love not worth the dig? JESUS
Positive message James, your work is good value as always, well written :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Dear JT :) What a beautiful poem with emotion that runs deep!

Your physical descriptions of something emotional in the third stanza conjure extremely vivid images and feelings - As you face these unpleasantries and acknowledge their existence, you take on a struggle that most would ignore - Digging deep where others examine only the surface..

Your transformation that begins in the end of 5th stanza is clearly not a journey of leisurely pursuit :)
Your flow, your strong imagery and message really comes through in a most heartbreaking, honest manner... Yet with an unyielding will to face this world accepting the negative and embracing the positive....

I suppose, no one really understand and appreciate love in its many expressions if you have never felt the hate...
Thank you for sharing this poem of strength and frailty, struggle and perseverance.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and, your review, much appreciated!
until then, love he who hates you for love conquers all

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Yes sir! They will hate you, for the world hated me first!
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Hi Jamestown. As I read your work, I gain a deep sense that life has not been easy for you, but that at last you are heading from despair into betterment of your situation. Your ability to express those emotions, albeit beneath metaphoric red herrings, is enviable. great piece of writing, alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Alf you are very observant, I like that! You are absolutely correct, but I always
remain posi.. read more
alf

9 Years Ago

Hi Jamestown. Been there, recognize the emotion. You just have better expression than I do. I hide b.. read more
I love this peice it is so true I love how you personified the emotions it is wonderful my freind

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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