Cross Wind...

Wind walking in love...

Cross Wind...

With the cross wind, I want to grab you and jump in,
let's not pretend, I want to spend my life with you,
are you ready to begin,

Like the wind dancing with the clouds,
I want to dance my life with you forever,
without any doubts,

We can waltz through this life,
you and I as a team,
won't you please be my wife,

1 2 3, we will step over or around,
any trial or tribulation,
because together we can face any situation,

We have danced into each other's hearts,
and there isn't anything that can pull us apart,

The next step in this dance is completely up to you,
but I am certain, that I'm in love with you,
I just need to know what you would like to do,

If you love me as I love you, please take my hand
and accept this dance, I want nothing more than
to give our love a chance,

So with the cross wind are you willing to jump in,
and let our love dance begin,

Now I can't promise you where this wind will
take us, or where we will end up,
but we'll leave that in God's hands
and let the great I AM handle our plans...

Reviews

[Cherry Pepperweb]

So wonderful and romantic!!
How fortunate to find something special as this.
Blessings to you sir poet.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

Another unconditional love that's very well penned! Great job :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[JayceeC]

James I really like the crosswind because you are not offering smooth sailing here, and marriage is rarely smooth sailing. You are offering something more and that's to stick with it through the winds of change and that is worth so much more. This has a great tone with your waltz of words throughout the poem which is echoed in the dancing structure with the strophes of twos, threes and fours. Well written my new friend. ~Jan

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

Very nice James this is the story of love and marriage and as long as you center your life around God nobody will rip you apart God bless

Bill

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome my friend

Bill

[sereenaoutloud]

just beautiful and very romantic! Great write to end my day! thanks of sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and sorry for late response:(

[sereenaoutloud]

no worries, i just go back and forth between my friends and read some of their stuff i have not yet read! :)

[WindsorWolf28]

:) this made me smile. Amazing work.

[Jamestown]

I like smiles:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[success]

for He never fails to deliver...remarkable poem

[Jamestown]

For his word never comes back void! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[paul]

great rhythm and flow

like medicine for the soul

[Jamestown]

Wow! I like soul meds! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Danny McCann-Hale]

"With the cross wind, I want to grab you and jump in,
let's not pretend, I want to spend my life with you"

The possible ambivalence of this phrase struck me instantly and compelled me to read on.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Nice one James. Keep posting

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!
B-blessed:)