Love's Flight...

Love's Flight...

A Poem by Jamestown
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My soaring heart...

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Love's Flight...

It is a gorgeous morning,
and the birds of the sky are singing,
preparing themselves to embark on a,
masterful journey into the great unknown,

My beautiful feathered friends, will be in search
for food and shelter, and my heart will be a tag along,
scavenging for love,

I will need to adopt some of their keen senses
their eyesight, they use to navigate there flight,
and find food and shelter, I will need to use open eyes
to spot my future wife,

I will also need their, drive and determination
they use to weather any storm, wind, or obstacles,
I will use to stay the course, never giving up no matter the,
trail or tribulations,

I will allow these amazing animals to teach me,
a little about themselves, as I too learn more about
myself,

When the day comes to an end, I pray that my friends
of flight, will endure the day with ease and find all the,
necessities needed to live comfortably,
and I too able to find that ever evasive love,

Love is not just something my heart desires,
Love is a something my heart absolutely needs,
and my heart will be soaring far and wide until,
I find it,

Today is the beginning of
Love's Flight...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
God is good!!!

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A very uplifting and inspiring poem. Full of positive energy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

P-positive
E-energy
A-activates
C-constant
E-elevation thanks for checki.. read more
Ana D S M

9 Years Ago

Lol. I like that. :)
You're welcome.
YES! Today is a fantastic day! The last stanza is absolutely fabulous, I love the inspiration that's taken from nature and how it has been interpreted like this. So very well written, thank you for sharing :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
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Riv
The unending journey, I'm just lucky to have found my future wife at such a young age, lots of things come our way but the struggle is only part of the journey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Correct, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
We can learn so much from animals, let it be birds or lions or dolphins. And they are so intuitive about the changes in Mother Earth...the changes of seasons or natural disasters. They know exactly when to go and where to go. And maybe we can learn a thing or two from them about love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree completely! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Another beautiful piece with interesting imagery and an an intriguing lesson learnt... great job... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I like it! Poems of nature are enjoyable.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Something so simple and vivid! Just what I wanted to read today
just like you said.. soaring heart with hope focused on the goal

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
Good work bro, was a good read, it brings to my mind a verse from the bible...

Behold the fowls of the air: for they sow not, neither do they reap, nor gather into barns; yet your heavenly Father feedeth them. Are ye not much better than they?
Matt 6:26
and don't worry you will meet your future wife when the time is right :) Be happy and keep writing.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
Oh, I love your poem. The ending lines are just perfect. One thing though: you might want to remove some commas where they shouldn't be at, like after 'a', 'since', and 'their'. I think you poem would still flow smoothly even if you don't put commas after those words. Overall a nice read - sweet and filled with so much hope. Thanks!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
nicely written, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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