THE BIG BANG...

THE BIG BANG...

Really?
Come on!

I know you are smarter then to believe,
this nonsense,

Oh I get it, you were talking about that time back
in college, when we got wasted and you fell down,
the dorm stairwell and banged your head really bad,

Or are you, talking about that old 1985 sleazy,
porno movie you still have stuck in that outdated,
VHS in your garage,

Well it's gotta be one of the two,
because these two sonorous,
make more sense then the, BIG BANG!

THE BIG BANG THEORY,
Ha! Ha! Yeah right!!!

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

Reviews

[Kyle]

That's interesting but not that stimulating. An artist must be open for all possibilities to listen small details with open arms even though it's a bullshit. Without that, your writing can be narrowed and limited like you are still in a box of your own which no one want to hear. Or you need to at least explain and try to understand your readers with your own voice.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful review, this piece
was only for fun, not to be explained, kind of a spoof if you will
sorry I disappointed you! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[KWP]

bit harsh i'd say - knowing your usual subject matter James I had to read on to see exactly what your thoughts were here - so for you as an artist I did already have an inkling of just what I was in for - disapoint me you did not ;)

[Jamestown]

Having fun and completely enjoyed myself, like my mom always told me" honey you can't make everyone happy, so don't waste your time worrying "about it" and 20 some years later, mom's absolutely correct! Mom's are smart:) lol thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Good write James. But I felt that something is lacking to be very honest. I hope you don't take me wrong.

[Jamestown]

Not at all, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[success]

hmm...I'M STUNNED..you cant make everybody happy

[Jamestown]

Darn it, I try! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

I thoughts the big bang theory was defined as
"The Big Bang theory is a collection of equations from all branches of science, that explains what happens when a universe begins from a very high state of energy density (what we could call extremely high temperature), and expands while cooling. "
Today of you hit Google. Google takes you to a TV show. Words change meaning and so do we. A interesting poem today. Made me do some research. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jamestown]

Your meaning you mentioned first is technically correct, but the
tv show is really cool as well, lol! Friend this piece was one of those goofy
impulse writes believe it or not after watching this show, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[mournful bear]

"god is a scientist not a magician" Einstein. there was a big bang then but WHO did that? you know WHO, PRAISE THE LORD ALMIGHTY!!!!!!!!!!

[Jamestown]

Amen! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Ana D S M]

I think that regardless of what you believe this poem is so great. The humour you've laced in your words is wonderful. I applaud you for your belief and conviction. I'm one of those "on the fence" types myself...
I admire the way you handle yourself.

[Jamestown]

Thank you so much, it was truly meant for fun:) i appreciate your review, b-blessed!

[Ana D S M]

I expected it was and you did a marvellous job. It was light and fun. :)

[R Smith]

I always like to think that if there was a big bang it was the creation of the universe and the whole of creation by God, God is everything so whatever happens in this universe we inhabit is his anyway, therefore yes James you are right God first, all else he sent to us :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed

[GreenEyedPoet]

Very humorous piece James. Nice job.

[Jamestown]

Thanks, that's what i was going for! I really appreciate your review, b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :)

[Ricky Campbell]

Not a huge fan of this poem. I do not agree with the message, and it seems to be formatted poorly. I do not appreciate when someone targets someone else's beliefs, no matter who or what the cause. We are all equal, no one is better than anyone else, and we all think differently.

[Jamestown]

I can appreciate where your coming from, I was going for fun in this piece
I am not trying to offend anyone and if I have I apologize, I am offended everyday
with some people's beliefs and what they choose to write
about, but I also understand everyone has the right to there
opinion and the right to voice there opinion, mom always said
" honey you can't make everyone happy " thanks for your review
and b-blessed!

[Dannyisawriter]

I found it funny because i agree with you. But...people who do actually believe that stuff may find this kind of condescending or judgmental.

[Jamestown]

They might, I was really just going for fun! Nothing to offend anyone, but
if it does, like my mother always says " honey it's impossible to make everyone happy"
I am offended everyday through people's work and opinions,
but it's our right to have them and voice them:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!