Pier Gazing...

Pier Gazing...

A Poem by Jamestown
"

Relaxing on the pier, deep in thought...

"
Pier Gazing...

As I sit on the Huntington beach pier mid-day,
with pen and paper sketching a beautiful ocean seen,
basking in the warmth of the bright sunshine and enjoying
a cool ocean breeze,

I am fixated on watching the tremendous waves,
crash violently to the sea shore, time and time again,
after a few minutes of viewing this incredible sight,
I lose myself in thought, as if to a state of hypnosis,

My mind is comparing the violent waves crashing to the earth,
over and over again to what us humans go through with our
problems on a daily basis,

I am completely in a trance, I see the effects of the waves
crashing in the same spot continuously, leaving a
substantial dent in the sand, and again think of the emotional,
dents we take in our lives with constant accruing problems,

As the waves are non-stop, sometimes it seems like our
human trials and tribulations are also non-stop and never ending,

Time has taken it's toll upon this peaceful day,
and day turns to early night,
The waves die down and the sea shore gets a break from the,
violent ambush,

As the sun sets, a soft gliding flow of constant sea water,
rolls over the large dent left in the sand and first smooths
it and then eventually completely erases it all together,

At that moment, I am fully aware of what God is teaching me today,
he is giving me a birds eye view of what he can do to our human problems,
if we ask him to help us and let him do work,

What a wonderful day pier gazing...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
GOD IS GOOD...

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Nature is beautiful and the sea is one of God's most fantastic creations. I've spent a lot of years at the seaside during holidays when I was young. I was fascinated by the waves. Our live is indeed as the sea, the waves and what they create. Very well written, James. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again friend, b-blessed!
beautiful imagery and flow of thoughts! loved it! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

4
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1022 Views
32 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on March 6, 2015
Last Updated on March 10, 2015

Author

Jamestown
Jamestown

Denver, CO



About
Fun, spontaneous, outgoing, God fearing man. Enjoy reading and have a passion to write. PTL. ... more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..