I remember Him saying that and will be glad when He returns. This world isn't such a good place for anyone anymore. A truly wonderful and inspiring poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I agree fully! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Very educational and instructional poem dedicated to our Savior Jamestown check out Symbol of love I posted 4 poems back God bless
Bill
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Ok will do! Check out pier gazing, you will enjoy it, thanks for checking this one
out and Go.. read moreOk will do! Check out pier gazing, you will enjoy it, thanks for checking this one
out and Gog bless you brother!
Tremendous look at what is in the here and now, we walk daily by Satan's side and we easily answer to his call, it is the illusion of good that he casts his spell and we want it to be real. Then we get caught up in his world...but he will lose, he always does...keep up this great work on him...pass it one to all people who have made amends...this is an excellent write and I so am for it. You have a gift for this...Bravo.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
9 Years Ago
You might like the one I posted yesterday...check it out..."Take My Hand".
Did he say that on the cross? No criticism, just being curious. Anyways, three very powerful words that can do so much! Everyone deserves to say these words at some or many points in their lives. Like when one finishes a good speech, they could finish with these words, though unsure of if it would confuse people. Haha. Great write...you always tell such powerful messages!
The good and evil, god and demons ( whatever names they take) are represented very will in this, James!
A reminder to be steadfast in your beliefs and hope..
A fluidic write :)
We all have our demons, Satan or others. We have to fight them and conquer, with the help of love, friendship and love. With this great human qualities and with the strenght of God we will conquer. Beautiful poem. :) Rudi
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks Rudi, I always appreciate your review and b-blessed!
Well done! Always fighting the god fight :) One day I hope that we will all realize the importance of working together for things that are not destructive.
Though a very odd experience for me, probably because I am from Denmark. I am not used to people speaking of God and Jesus. I have only come across the kind of language you find in the bible or as spoken by a priest when attending a christening. So when you use contemporary language it is odd to me - but I like it:
"Jesus wants his crown back,
cause he is the boss,
Hey dummies, " It Is Finished "
Don't you remember, that's what Christ said
at the cross... John 19:30..."
I like this ending, the way it uses contemporary language contrasting the more conventional images. But I don't know if it is a carefully planned strategy or if this is relatively standard in the USA?
Denmark wow! I was thinking of doing mission work there! I hear it's a beautiful and fantastic .. read moreDenmark wow! I was thinking of doing mission work there! I hear it's a beautiful and fantastic
place to dwell, anyway thanks for your review, I truly appreciate it! One question though, I'm kind of
confused with the last line of review about strategy, explain please so my little brain understands, lol
9 Years Ago
Well, is it the norm to speak of God and Jesus in the context of not just contemporary language but .. read moreWell, is it the norm to speak of God and Jesus in the context of not just contemporary language but also using slang-like expressions in the US? Or did you employ the word 'boss' to be playful, consciously or subconsciously?
Denmark is beautiful in many ways, though we are not a very welcoming people, we don't like strangers unless there is something in it for us. Not everyone is like that, but a still rising number are joining that group of Danes. That makes me kind of sad!
9 Years Ago
Gotcha! Yes boss, used loosely(playful)
Good feedback on Denmark as well, Thanks!