Frozen hearts...

Thawing cold hearts!

Frozen hearts...

As the snow falls and settles to the frozen tundra,
my mind can't but ponder, if this is what it must be,
like for a cold heart to settle in on a frost bitten world,

As the prince of the air is ever present,
and cascading his chilling persuasion upon,
many at an alarming rate,

The frosting evil is eating people from the,
inside out, one by one, as if snacking on a bag
of chips,

The prince of darkness, is shading the light
with ease and enjoying every minute of it,
Erasing good as fast as, a stealth bomber in
the midst of a tactical strike,

Frozen hearts, are given in to the evil one,
and bringing a tag along with them,

Happiness is turning into sadness,
hope into hate and love is fading quickly,
Satan is bringing out the big guns and trying,
to completely eliminate faith,

I myself will never lose my faith and refuse to,
allow Satan or any of his demons to freeze my heart,

I will always put the armor of God on before leaving my
domain and carry my sword, just in case that cold breeze
shifts in my direction,

I will continue to try to bring warmth to frozen hearts,
and honor God as a soldier of Christ...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!

Reviews

[mournful bear]

WOW!!!!!!!!!! dang good read!!!!!!!!!! that's how i feel!!!!!!!!!! the LORD is above all else.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your kind words and YES,
All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Closing Thoughts]

I adore this imagery in this poem! It is beautifully written, flows perfectly, and has an immensely important message. Thawing frozen hearts is a responsibility for the people of Christ- and we must not allow our own heart to be frozen. Thank you for your encouraging poem.

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and all glory and praise belongs to Christ Jesus!
PTL:)

[Natureislelove]

Wonderfully written, the truth and Message of God being vividly brought across.

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautifully written, James. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

(As the snow falls and settles to the frozen tundra, my mind can't but ponder, if this is what it must be,
like for a cold heart to settle in on a frost bitten world,) This is a wonderful "hook" and first stanza which just whets the readers appetite for more. I enjoyed the entire write my friend! ~Sharon

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

Ah but brother we are to put the hot amber of Jesus love within their hearts and God will thaw that heart.Greater is he that is in me than he that is in the world nice poem. Be a gardener as I plant those seeds someone else will water it and God will make it grow PTL

Bill

[Jamestown]

Absolutely! Thanks again my brother, PTL!

[W R Stowe]

your welcome brother God bless

[emmajoy]

Words so often show the heart of a writer.. but only when created upon a strong thread of utter commitment. Your thoughtful verses clutch close a deeply rooted belief. Tis something to feel, tis even more to share with others. Finely put.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

"I will continue to try to bring warmth to frozen hearts, ..." An important message

This imagery reads with sincere wonder and philosophical melancholy, quite haunting and poetic:
"As the snow falls and settles to the frozen tundra,
my mind can't but ponder, if this is what it must be,
like for a cold heart to settle in on a frost bitten world,"

and then you use a more down to earth image, which made me smile:
"The frosting evil is eating people from the,
inside out, one by one, as if snacking on a bag
of chips,"

In this way you bring these haunting images into the everyday world. Another of such images is seen her:
"The prince of darkness, is shading the light
with ease and enjoying every minute of it,
Erasing good as fast as, a stealth bomber in
the midst of a tactical strike, "

Thanks for sharing, it is a great poem!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! B-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful work. Love the way you pulled it all together at the end with "I will continue to try to bring warmth to frozen hearts, and honor God as a soldier of Christ." Those are beautiful lines... thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! B-blessed!

[Amy Rose]

Beautiful. :) Really beautiful.

I will continue to try to bring warmth to frozen hearts,
and honor God as a soldier of Christ...

Amazing:) Keep it up.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!