I'm of this world,but not for long,
I move in time to the corporate song,
and unwittingly,I'm a pawn in play,
and will this way be ,'till my dying day.
I agree with moonskittles on this one. Great job. I like how you took the last supper scene, and used it metaphorically. May the spirit of Jesus bless everyone we meet and never see.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Amen! I really appreciate you checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
This my dear James embraces the true meaning of Christianity! You have done a great job encouraging all of us to live a life worth our calling. Blessings!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your kind review! I'm just trying to
do my part, I f.. read moreThanks for checking it out, I appreciate your kind review! I'm just trying to
do my part, I fall short of the glory of God everyday, sometimes every minute,
but Lord knows, I try to honor my God! This piece was fun to create and has
many hidden scripture messages within, thanks again and b-blessed!
Interesting poem Jamestown ... it does make me thinking , am I being served or the server ?:-)
Sorry I am being late in reviewing your works , lately I am not up to it ...
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Totally understand! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I really love how you presented this to all of us. Also love the first line as it makes one think. Without God, we are nothing. God bless you..Valentine
Another great poem James! Definitely makes you think.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks! It definitely has a few different messages in this piece, thanks again for checking it outread moreThanks! It definitely has a few different messages in this piece, thanks again for checking it out
and b-blessed!
Such a small poem that is amazing in every word you choose to use!
I love it so much... I see great potential in your writing...
If you could read my story The Blonde Girl and leave your opinion about it, It would be greatful.
Keep up the awesome job!
C. Lee Battaglia
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! I will read your piece
this evening, thanks .. read moreThanks for checking it out and your kind review! I will read your piece
this evening, thanks again and b-blessed!
Ahhhhh....love this food for thought.....though, a bit of bitter-sweet reality, for me, is that most of those who should also be "not of this world" are actually building for themselves extremely comfortables kingdoms on this earth.........
This is a great poem about Christs last supper. Jamestown you're truly one of the most fascinated writers I have ever talked to. You are so a doer. Real writers are real doers. And those are the type of people I hang out with. But the big doer in this picture is the big man himself God. God is the ultimate doer in his place.
Doer: meaning someone who is doing something with a purpose in his or her's life.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! I really appreciate it, b-blessed!