Lying Eyes...

Can't always believe what you see...

Lying Eyes...

As we all know, we can't always believe what our eyes
allow us to see, just think of the several times our eyes
have left us feeling deceived,

Ladies- how many times has your beautiful lying eyes,
locked in on what you thought was a dream come true,
prince charming standing right in front of you,

later to find out, this man is quite alarming and
left you feeling blue,

Gentleman- how many times has our deceptive eyes,
honed in on what we thought was our future wife,

to find out later, we can't stand this woman
anymore then one night,

Our lying eyes, love to play tricks on our hearts
and minds, so much that there's been times when,
I wish I could remove them and leave them behind,

But obviously, we can't remove our eyes,
we need our valuable eyes to ease our lives,
I just wish they weren't so good, at telling lies...

Author's Note

Can't always believe what you see!
Eyes sometimes lie...
PTL!!!

Reviews

[Tania]

"But obviously, we can't remove our eyes,
we need our valuable eyes to ease our lives,
I just wish they weren't so good, at telling lies... "
I agree 100%
Beautifully written as well:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ehra Khan]

A very true write! the lying eyes are the reason for quite a lot of my misery right now! I absolutely love it, that u chose this as the theme of you're write.I would truly hope that people start functioning their minds along with their eyes! Things would be so much better! Thanks for this wonderful poem:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks again for checking it out and your kind review!

[the girl in the black m..]

Awesome! so how many lies did your eyes cries.

[Jamestown]

Many, but. One big one, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[~]

Ahhh.. yes, some have mastered indeed the art of lying with their eyes, although I would say the danger is when we run with our feelings and forget to hear the reasons. Blessings!

[Jamestown]

You speak the truth! Thanks again for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Very good poem Jamestown ... eyes see things but brain does the talking to tempt the poor heart :-)
Thank you for sharing

[Jamestown]

Thanks again friend, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[Lizzie Mitchell]

definitely diggin the flow
really nice, relatable piece

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Love the flow of the piece and the message it gives! Great poem. :]

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Precious]

thanks for sharing great message

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great message, thank you for sharing it.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

I heard this message loud and clear!!! My eyes have definitely lied to me... and especially on the wife part! haha great work and thanks for sharing

[Jamestown]

I know exactly what you mean! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!