GRAVITY...

Overcoming negative gravity...

GRAVITY...

Gravity: weight, heaviness,
the state or condition of being grave;

Now we know the definition of gravity,
it is what it is, nowhere in the definition does it say
when one is down, one must stay down,

The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy,
sad but true, hate being at the forefront,

It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial,
I've fallen and I can't get up!!!

When can you remember in history the human soul giving in
so easily, (never) the thought of defeat to us human's is incomprehensible,

Now I totally understand hard times, but giving in, I just don't understand,
What happened to when the going gets tough, the tough get going,
that's the human soul I'm a custom to,

When the negative gravity is pulling one down, one should identify
with this unwanted energy and light the soul fire,
devouring anything negative in it's path,

Replacing that energy with positive energy,
water on fire, if you will,
hate breads hate and so on, love breads love and so on,
I believe that the reason one can't get up is because one is adding
gas to the fire and not water to eliminate it,

A negative gravitational pull is at times unbearable,
but it is no match for one's soul, giving in to negative energy
is down right weak, and when the soul fire is lit, one's
soul is an outrageous inferno that is awesome, and weak by no means...

So light the soul fire and get up already!!!

Author's Note

Negative energy is killing us all, even within the cafe at times,
I just want to be a spark of positive energy for all of us including myself!
Hope you enjoy my work and God bless each and every one of you!!!

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

Reviews

[TheSwordAndTheQuill]

Yes. We've seemed to have developed this response to just stay down when we already are. And when people do try to rise they are met with adversity and close-mindedness to drag them back down. Very good.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Man I couldn't agree with you anymore... awesome words and amazing inspirational lines in this poem. "The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy, sad but true, hate being at the forefront" I love those lines as it provides inspiration directly to me. Great work James one of my favorite pieces so far!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and happy you enjoyed reading it, thanks again and b-blessed!

[Dara]

You have certainly lit a fire under me! This powerful write is not only inspiring but has an energy all of its own. Thank you for spreading some of your light :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind words, I appreciate it!
Getting people aware of the negative energy that is drowning us
I thought was important to address, thanks again and b-blessed!

[Amelia May]

The amount of personal literature that I have read on this particular site is vast, but very few of the works that I have read have actually received a comment or rating from me. However, I do feel as if a response to this poem is necessary. I completely agree in regards to the comment about negative energy killing us. I believe that it is entirely true and your poem has removed some of that negative energy from my day. Due to this, I would like to send you a virtual thank you, so thank you. Keep writing and keep being you. Much appreciated.

[Jamestown]

I really appreciate your review, that means so much!!! If I have threw a little water on a negative fire, I am
so pleased!! Thanks again and b-blessed! PTL!

[....................]

So true James, so true: negativity breeds negativity. A nice write - thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

True! I agree that you should never give up despite what hardship you may encounter.

In regard to you Author's Note: I think many use writing as a means to get rid of all the bad feelings; a tool to make one's way back to the positive by letting out the negative?

[Jamestown]

I agree, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Tks]

Just like how one must experience darkness to appreciate light, so too one must experience negativity an overcome to appreciate the power of being positive!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

[success]

you said it all...great! we've to overcome it...well done

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

Another well written full of wisdom composition. Thanks for sharing brethren! I have enjoyed it from start to finish. :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend, i appreciate your review and b-blessed.

[Lavender Soya]

My pleasure. :-)

[wordman]

positive and negative good and evil left and right
it has always been with us,just getting worse
it`s time for that old anti christ

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I truly appreciate your support, thanks again and b-blessed!

[wordman]

you are welcome