GRAVITY...

GRAVITY...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Overcoming negative gravity...

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GRAVITY...

Gravity: weight, heaviness,
the state or condition of being grave;

Now we know the definition of gravity,
it is what it is, nowhere in the definition does it say
when one is down, one must stay down,

The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy,
sad but true, hate being at the forefront,

It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial,
I've fallen and I can't get up!!!

When can you remember in history the human soul giving in
so easily, (never) the thought of defeat to us human's is incomprehensible,

Now I totally understand hard times, but giving in, I just don't understand,
What happened to when the going gets tough, the tough get going,
that's the human soul I'm a custom to,

When the negative gravity is pulling one down, one should identify
with this unwanted energy and light the soul fire,
devouring anything negative in it's path,

Replacing that energy with positive energy,
water on fire, if you will,
hate breads hate and so on, love breads love and so on,
I believe that the reason one can't get up is because one is adding
gas to the fire and not water to eliminate it,

A negative gravitational pull is at times unbearable,
but it is no match for one's soul, giving in to negative energy
is down right weak, and when the soul fire is lit, one's
soul is an outrageous inferno that is awesome, and weak by no means...

So light the soul fire and get up already!!!

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
Negative energy is killing us all, even within the cafe at times,
I just want to be a spark of positive energy for all of us including myself!
Hope you enjoy my work and God bless each and every one of you!!!

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

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Your poem is most inspiring...a positive piece with great advice in dealing with the negative energies which plague us ..pulling one down..nice work..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind words, I appreciate it:)
Thanks again and b-blessed!.. read more
life is full of pain and disappointment, but as Ben Franklin once said...."use the disappointments to your advantage, learn and move on"

sulking does not help anyone....

i like your positive, and kind energy.
and it resounds in your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I try, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
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Life is an exercise for the heart and soul. Sucks sometimes. Specially when you loose. thanx for this positive energy :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
so stoked after reading this. totally my kind of poetry and i'm diggin' it like seng roots under tall poplars! this is my first 100. thanks for sharing this jamestown. pocahontas would love this me thinks...hawa!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Well thank you for your kind review, I am honored!! PTL
Thanks again and b-blessed
You are so right, negative energy weighs us down. It has taken me a long time to move past the negative and be positive- to see the silver lining in most situations. Great piece James!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again for your kind review and b-blessed!
GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

Welcome. :)
An inspirational write indeed! Perfect equation of gravity to the Negative energy..they are millstone tied around our neck.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree fully, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I will be shopping for a good read, .. read more
Deepika

9 Years Ago

Always welcome :)
True. Negative energy will make us fall.
My partner always tell me not to lose faith and stay positive. He is my strength. No negative energy will pull me down.
Very relevant!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

That is fantastic, its always nice having a special someone to help stay positive, thanks for
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You're so right, James. Negative feelings or energy works in the opposite sense. Let's be positive. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Right on, you speak so true! We all need and deserve positive energy in our lives. The negative definitely controls too much. Even for me some days. It took me a long time to figure out how to be positive and look on the bright side, but I've learned of ways to seek the positive through writing. So, I give you a thank you and a big round of applause!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Well thank you my very talented and sweet friend! I thank you for your awesome
review!! Glad .. read more
I Am Svetlana

9 Years Ago

I know and I apologize for being away. Glad to see you've still got it :) keep it up!

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