GRAVITY...

Overcoming negative gravity...

GRAVITY...

Gravity: weight, heaviness,
the state or condition of being grave;

Now we know the definition of gravity,
it is what it is, nowhere in the definition does it say
when one is down, one must stay down,

The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy,
sad but true, hate being at the forefront,

It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial,
I've fallen and I can't get up!!!

When can you remember in history the human soul giving in
so easily, (never) the thought of defeat to us human's is incomprehensible,

Now I totally understand hard times, but giving in, I just don't understand,
What happened to when the going gets tough, the tough get going,
that's the human soul I'm a custom to,

When the negative gravity is pulling one down, one should identify
with this unwanted energy and light the soul fire,
devouring anything negative in it's path,

Replacing that energy with positive energy,
water on fire, if you will,
hate breads hate and so on, love breads love and so on,
I believe that the reason one can't get up is because one is adding
gas to the fire and not water to eliminate it,

A negative gravitational pull is at times unbearable,
but it is no match for one's soul, giving in to negative energy
is down right weak, and when the soul fire is lit, one's
soul is an outrageous inferno that is awesome, and weak by no means...

So light the soul fire and get up already!!!

Author's Note

Negative energy is killing us all, even within the cafe at times,
I just want to be a spark of positive energy for all of us including myself!
Hope you enjoy my work and God bless each and every one of you!!!

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Seem to be heavy on statement and lacking poetic veer.

Regards,
Al

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[alf]

Hi James. You have done it again!!! You've got right down to it and addressed the issue with all the fire and punch you can muster. Another excellent write!!! Why are you not a world leader. Imagine what you could do!!! Phew alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, I truly appreciate you:)

[alf]

I'm actually quite serious. The whole world is in need of true leadership!!!

[Jamestown]

It's true, this world is in a great need for leaders:(
I have always been in a leading role throughout life, I just pray that I can do more
always for Gods glory!

[alf]

Me too!!! Just a little more quietly

[Jamestown]

I hope I'm not offensive with my bold approach, I sure am not going
for that at all.

[alf]

No!! No way! I'm just a quieter type. I can see you as a leader, I'm more the back of the crowd, quiet assenter. No offence meant by my comment!!!!

[Jamestown]

None taken, just wanted to make sure because I get irritated when some people
come of to strong and seem to know it all.

[alf]

I don't think could come across like that if you put every ounce of effort into the try!!!

[W R Stowe]

Gravity is for inanimate objects and not a free floating soul.If the new baby that fell on his rump and cried refused to get up again we would all be bedridden never give up is my slogan God will lift us out of the sludge this evil world wants to surround us with nice message bro

Bill

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

walang anuman is your welcome in Tagalog diyos pagpalain mo is God bless you in Tagalog a new lesson for you today

kuwenta Bill

[W R Stowe]

actually that is a bill that is duelol

[Jamestown]

Thanks and tagalog diyos pagplalain:)
Love learning thx

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[MCS]

This somehow reminds of that song Soulshine
Thank you for this

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and, I apologize for late response, b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Great write James. Keep posting

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sereenaoutloud]

Another one i really like. "The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy," nicely said and i totally agree.
Also on a funny note OMG those life alert commercials seriously? who comes up with them? lol

[Jamestown]

I very rich somebody:( Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[closed]

great poem and message

the alliteration is really cool

seems kind of like literary science somehow




-Dream

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Juria Kurosaki]

This truly has a deep meaning, I like deep. I like things that hold emotion, it's how I know that what I'm reading is meaningful to the author, and I believe that, that's the sort of thing that is important. Awesome poem. Kepp it up, I'm totally ready for more.

[Jamestown]

Well thank you! I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Uplifting, Jamestown!
We could all use an infusion of positive energy.
Thanks for continually trying to give us that.

[Jamestown]

I try! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!