All In Do Time...

Love Conquers, all in do time...

All In Do Time...

A still tranquil evening,
I gaze upon the vast moon lit sky,
and am drawn to one particular bright beautiful shining star,

For whatever reason this star has my undivided attention,
as I indulge in it's beauty, my mind suddenly ponders the thought,
of my soul mate, out under this same star and wishing upon
it the same wishes that I am,

Wishing for true love, joy, peace and happiness,
parallel thoughts under the moon,

As I continue to bask in the calm, cool evening environment,
I wish, a soft breeze could come and deliver a message,
of "all in do time" to my future wife,

To whisper in her ear, that the man she has been wishing for upon
this star, is out there longing for her as much as she for him,
and " all in do time" our once desperate wishes will become a reality and a
heart felt poem to share with the world,

I want so much to tell her, that I have been thinking about her for some time now,
and "all in do time" I will do everything in my power to make sure,
she never has to wish upon a star again...

Patience is a virtue,
Love is a must and I will find her,
before I return to dust!!!

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

I love your analogy of wishing upon a star and I believe that wind will blow your way some day trust in God to bring that special lady your way but view with the eyes of your heart and see beyond any flaws it will insure you don't allow lust to select that special lady be blessed bro

Bill

[Jamestown]

I agree with you completely!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

your welcome bro

[catwoman]

this truly is beautiful...it gives a sense of hope that we shall ultimately find our love :)

[Jamestown]

That's what I pray for, everyone deserves to be loved, sometimes we must
be patient in finding the one:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Slick writing James. Keep posting

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love does conquer all in due time, but sometimes it feels like that due time will never come.

[Jamestown]

True words, I have faith. Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

i like poems like this one that takes me on a journey of imagery along pondering thoughts.... that quiet inner thinking put to paper. thanks for sharing

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[NeiL ArandA]

This is a well penned piece Jamestown....

Some edit suggestion"
All In Do Time ( do you mean in "due" time ? )

[Jamestown]

Yeah, but I chose to stay with do. Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I love what this represents and the feelings it brings forth.
You combine images with inner thoughts and wants.
Desire and want are there, too.
However, the trust to wait is clear.
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Welcome always!
:)
Happy writing & reading!

[R Smith]

brilliant writing James, your confidence in a positive future does you credit, i read recently that what we believe ourselves to be is what we become, basically think negative and negativity will haunt you, so believe that which you wish for is out there coming your way and it will and you tell us this perfectly, b-blessed also my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Friend I truly believe those inspiring words you dropped on this review, thanks for
checking it out and b-blessed!

[Autumn Lyric]

Beautiful expressions and thank you for sharing

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[one sky]

This is divine. Your future wife will be so lucky. Love is the most precious gift anyone could have in life.
I love this one...favorite.
Thanks for sharing.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind words, b-blessed!