EMOTIONS...

EMOTIONS...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Black & White Emotions :):

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EMOTIONS...

A mountain of anxiety,
An ocean of tears,
The Grand Canyon of pain,
The Great Wall of fears,

A galaxy of hate,
and a desolate desert of love,
all because we don't seek, him who's above,

We have lost sight of the light,
and in creeps darkness with the night,

These dark emotions, do not just vanish at a
drop of a dime, but with God they will all in his time,

The mountains will turn into miles of hope,
and the oceans to dreams,
the Grand Canyon to love, and the Great Wall,
will fall to him the supreme,

The galaxy will become freedom,
and no desolate desert to speak of,
because of God and his vast love,

If we cry out for help and truly believe,
we will definitely receive, because he does
not deceive,

So let's get our lives back on track,
ask God for help and cut the crap...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

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Very eloquent James. I admire your strong faith in God. Keep writing faithfully.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and the kind words, I to admire your
contagious writing:) Thanks a.. read more
Shane Mohamed

9 Years Ago

You're certainly welcome.
I enjoyed the read! I like the imagery that symbolizes the extend of God's power. First all this power of the universe and nature is threatening and void; but it then becomes a strong nurturing force when you look to God. Very beautiful. I must admit that I am not religious, and do not usually write in terms of God. But despite whatever religious or non-religious views, I don't think that anyone can disagree, with the idea that patience and belief in a better life, world etc. is something you should strive for using the good things that are already available instead of only letting in the bad - even if the the reward is not immediate. That is how I read - you have a different point?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I am a firm believer in asking God to take the wheel of life, with him driving there
are no w.. read more
That's an awesome poem. great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Flow of emotions. Well written. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again and b-blessed!
I can honestly say that I love this poem very much. The theme of emotions is really great because emotions can hurt or heal us. But if we let God take the wheel of our lives, there is no stopping us from speaking and sharing his name in the glory of him. This is a great read that you have created Jamestown. I really love it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend, your words are always encouraging, I appreciate it!
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wonderfully spiritual and inspiring :) I myself am not a christian but I do feel a higher power, a God of sorts.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
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ron
Beautiful words about about God and all his glory.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

God has given you a gift and you use it very well.
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for that kind encouragement, I appreciate it greatly!
All glory belongs to God!
ron

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome James.
"These dark emotions, do not just vanish at a
drop of a dime, but with God they will all in
his time"....surely they will vanish

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
beautiful and true wisdom, very good, James. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks Rudi, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!
I think once we accept all emotion buoying around within us as a part of us - when we choose not to hide them and experience them instead we can learn and grow - eventually leading us to remember that we are actually already united with the greater force, always have been always will be

nice sentiment X

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and great review, I appreciate it, b-blessed!

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