EMOTIONS...

Black & White Emotions :):

EMOTIONS...

A mountain of anxiety,
An ocean of tears,
The Grand Canyon of pain,
The Great Wall of fears,

A galaxy of hate,
and a desolate desert of love,
all because we don't seek, him who's above,

We have lost sight of the light,
and in creeps darkness with the night,

These dark emotions, do not just vanish at a
drop of a dime, but with God they will all in his time,

The mountains will turn into miles of hope,
and the oceans to dreams,
the Grand Canyon to love, and the Great Wall,
will fall to him the supreme,

The galaxy will become freedom,
and no desolate desert to speak of,
because of God and his vast love,

If we cry out for help and truly believe,
we will definitely receive, because he does
not deceive,

So let's get our lives back on track,
ask God for help and cut the crap...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

Reviews

[Madison Rose]

This is a great poem James! :)
Very inspiring, and uplifting! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

It was an awesome read James. Keep posting

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Sindu]

This is great James.. Emotions always seem like a major proportion of our mind and your imagery really sets in the picture. I wrote a little something about emotions few days ago but it did not post it here.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and why didn't you post your emotions piece?
I would love to read it, I'm sure it's fantastic.

[Sindu]

you're welcome. Sure, I will post it :) I sometimes write and let it soak into the pages for a while. Makes it feel like it belongs to me for a bit :)

[NeiL ArandA]

This is beautifully penned Jamestown. I do see now your hearts cry and passion here. I'm humbled by such acknowledgement of awesome Name.
Everything really flows here. The last line are well penned with good flow.
I suggest for another replacement of the line " cut the crap " though its straightforward. It's somewhat vulgar.

[Jamestown]

Will definitely consider, thanks again:)

[Seashell]

Amen x
Great piece from your heart

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Novicepoet14]

I absolutely love this piece!!!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[R Smith]

emotions aplenty here James, well expressed and great verses, a mighty poem :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Amelia May]

I love your poems. They brighten my days with a smile. I really enjoy reading all of the. You are a very talented writer. Your words give great praise to our Lord and it is greatly appreciated. So thank you!

[Jamestown]

That is my purpose while on earth, to serve my King in heaven, thanks for the
kind words and b-blessed!

[SmittyJas]

Excellent write giving praise to our Lord and his guidance shall lead us home to peace in heaven our home.

[Jamestown]

The glory always belongs to Christ Jesus 4-ever! Amen....
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jane_Gallagher]

Beautiful use of imagery- and a nice reminder to never lose faith. Something that everyone needs once in a while. :) I look forward to reading more of your work!
-Jane

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!