The Beautiful People...

Not so pretty!!!

The Beautiful People...

Are not so beautiful you see,
they lie, cheat and steal, they live to deceive,

Their hearts are filled with hate,
and when fellow man struggles, they laugh
cause that's what they anticipate,

The Beautiful People, hide in the dark,
and prey on you cause your the mark,

They are running this world into the ground,
as the good folks just watch and stand around,

The Beautiful People, are not beautiful anymore,
they only think of themselves, always looking to score,

As we watch they get rich, then we cry,
then we b***h,

I refuse to fall with this world,
please grab my hand and let's make a stand,
let's bring beauty back to the people and the land,
now if you ask me, that sounds like a plan,

We have lost sight at what is right,
but together we can still win this fight...

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

Beautiful thought, i smell rebellion..hope we can bring back beauty & may GOOD win :) Loved the rhyme scheme :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks friend, I know I can't do it alone! Try to reach one at a time! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[success]

really really cool n touching..stay bless man

[success]

really really cool n touchinh..stay bless man

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Michael Stevens]

Speaking as one of the others, I think I can say excellent!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Michael Stevens]

You're quite welcome, and you be the same!

[Valentine]

I fear more for those in power who have taken God out of the government, our schools etc. I thought this country was founded upon God! Valentine

[Jamestown]

I agree with you completely, they are now talks of taking "in God we trust"
off our money, please Lord help us! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Dylan Andrews]

y-y-your w-w-riting i-is j-j-ust g-g-reat

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Dylan Andrews]

N-N-N-N-No P-P-P-P-Problem M-M-M-M-Man..... K-K-K-K-Keep U-U-U-U-Up T-T-T-T-The G-G-G-G-Good W-W-W-W-Work.....

[Daniel Whitaker]

What's with the stutter?????

[Double T]

You know this is a great poem about rich people who care about themselves. I love it. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Powerful declaration of your thoughts, James. Well written. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

It's a sad but true thing. Great poem James.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

[Avagarey]

Great work as always! Sad, yet very true. Let's mend this broken world! I wonder everyday what this place looked like when the Father first created us humans, and then I wonder "Could we restore it?"

[Jamestown]

I don't believe us damaged, hateful humans will ever get on the same page,
but we certainly can be accountable for one another, Revelation talks
about the Lord refurbishing the earth after Jesus returns,thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!