In Walks An Angel...

Angel on earth...

In Walks An Angel...

Today God has graced me with the presence of an angel,

While enjoying a morning cup of joe,
at the local Starbucks, in walks the most beautiful creature,
my eyes have ever seen,

Long jet black flowing hair, crystal blue almost transparent eyes,
silky soft mocha colored skin and a smile that lit the room,

As she entered, my heart began to race and thoughts fire shots,
In my head randomly like Vietnam,

While this angel orders her beverage, my mind is in full on war trying,
to find something perfect to say to heaven sent, that will mirror
her perfection,

With the last shots fired, I make a decision to approach,
and say, hello my name is James and I would really like to purchase your,
coffee this morning, see here on earth angels don't buy anything,

She smiles and giggles and agrees, as I walk back to my table,
I retreat with a whisper of b-blessed today,

She again smiles, thanks me and says God bless you as well,

At this time her coffee is ready and she turns to leave the building,
I rise and walk and open the door for her, then I kindly mention I didn't,
catch your name,

With a soft and soothing voice she replies, my name is ANGEL and it is nice to
meet you, with a faint smile and a pounding heart,

I reply, of course it is, I already knew that,
it wouldn't be anything else...

Reviews

[Autumn Lyric]

Another winner...there is a great love story in this piece. Like this one a lot because of the setting and the simplicity of the everyday magnified by beautiful images in words.

[Jamestown]

I agree, thanks for checking it out and supporting my work, means a lot
b-blessed!

[Double T]

This is a great poem, really it is great. Because angels do walk among us because they love the children of God in the same love that the Lord has. I'm really glad that you and I are great friends Jamestowm, I admire your work.

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend I feel the same about you! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

A sweet and lovely poem, the imagination in here is really great my friend, I could picture it all in my head (I love those kinds of poems)
Another awesome write James! Thank your sharing this amazing piece of poetry :)

[Jamestown]

I appreciate your review and may God hold your hand through the weekend!

[Lizardo]

To you to James! Sorry I haven't been around reviewing your work, I have had a lot of homework and things to study

[Sindu]

Such a sweet, sincere and romantic tale. Great how you described the reactions and her too :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Patrick John Boker]

wow bro . this is so very heart felt and so warm touching . it hits straight home to the heart . I really like how you right . please right some more

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, and b-blessed!

[KWP]

Very romantic indeed - reminds me of the song Goodbye My Love - a lot XX

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and I will listen to that song, b-blessed!

[KWP]

Love that song XX

[AaronFreitas]

Next time I need some good pickup lines I'm hitting you up first! Smooth work in the poem.. I really enjoyed it and could visualize being there at the same moment observing as you worked your magic!

[Jamestown]

I appreciate it brother, I actually really enjoyed this piece, and I think people
will as well, l hope anyways, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

Your really becoming quite the romantic aren't you? Nice job bro PTL

Bill

[Jamestown]

I am trying, my brother, trying I am! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome
Bill

[GreenEyedPoet]

Loved the ending, nice piece hun. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :)

[~]

Ahhh a lovely lady warming your day. Nothing more beautiful than an Angel's visage :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!