In Walks An Angel...

Angel on earth...

In Walks An Angel...

Today God has graced me with the presence of an angel,

While enjoying a morning cup of joe,
at the local Starbucks, in walks the most beautiful creature,
my eyes have ever seen,

Long jet black flowing hair, crystal blue almost transparent eyes,
silky soft mocha colored skin and a smile that lit the room,

As she entered, my heart began to race and thoughts fire shots,
In my head randomly like Vietnam,

While this angel orders her beverage, my mind is in full on war trying,
to find something perfect to say to heaven sent, that will mirror
her perfection,

With the last shots fired, I make a decision to approach,
and say, hello my name is James and I would really like to purchase your,
coffee this morning, see here on earth angels don't buy anything,

She smiles and giggles and agrees, as I walk back to my table,
I retreat with a whisper of b-blessed today,

She again smiles, thanks me and says God bless you as well,

At this time her coffee is ready and she turns to leave the building,
I rise and walk and open the door for her, then I kindly mention I didn't,
catch your name,

With a soft and soothing voice she replies, my name is ANGEL and it is nice to
meet you, with a faint smile and a pounding heart,

I reply, of course it is, I already knew that,
it wouldn't be anything else...

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Eloquent, charming and endearing,
A skillfully fashioned, warmly expressed, piece of work.
Glad I stopped by, Mr. J!

[Jamestown]

Well thank you for checking it out and your kind words, b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Beautiful rendezvous. Loved the story.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[JesusSonOfGod]

Is this a true story? If it is, you must be very special to meet an angel. :3

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[JesusSonOfGod]

Seriously is it a true story? Just wondering

[Marie]

Wonderful to meet an angelthat early in the morning...a blessing all day long....

[Jamestown]

Yes! Wonderful to meet an angel anytime of the day, I agree!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Wonder sight to see. One question, is her name really Angel? Attractions by sight often can work into something wonderful, especially with angels. Are angels ever male???? Valentine

[Jamestown]

Kathie the bible says yes they are males, lol! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Marie]

Angels are sexless. The Bible used that gender, because some sort of definition had to be made.

[R Smith]

lovely work James, did you get her number ?

[Jamestown]

I'm talking with her, but I leave Cali next week for Colorado:(
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very beautiful narrative poem. Liked it very much, James. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks Rudi, I really appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is cool and sweet! I love stories about angels and in many ways they come into a human's life.
Very nice piece. :)

[Jamestown]

Thank you very much, b-blessed!

[Christopher Casper]

This is my favorite one you've written. I can see each scene play out in my mind. Jet black hair and blue eyes...man I love that combination. :) Thanks for sharing with me again.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I had fun with this write, thanks for your review and b-blessed!

[Ishita Dixit]

Like a movie this!
Very sweet!

[Jamestown]

Kinda! Thanks again and b-blessed!