In Walks An Angel...

Angel on earth...

In Walks An Angel...

Today God has graced me with the presence of an angel,

While enjoying a morning cup of joe,
at the local Starbucks, in walks the most beautiful creature,
my eyes have ever seen,

Long jet black flowing hair, crystal blue almost transparent eyes,
silky soft mocha colored skin and a smile that lit the room,

As she entered, my heart began to race and thoughts fire shots,
In my head randomly like Vietnam,

While this angel orders her beverage, my mind is in full on war trying,
to find something perfect to say to heaven sent, that will mirror
her perfection,

With the last shots fired, I make a decision to approach,
and say, hello my name is James and I would really like to purchase your,
coffee this morning, see here on earth angels don't buy anything,

She smiles and giggles and agrees, as I walk back to my table,
I retreat with a whisper of b-blessed today,

She again smiles, thanks me and says God bless you as well,

At this time her coffee is ready and she turns to leave the building,
I rise and walk and open the door for her, then I kindly mention I didn't,
catch your name,

With a soft and soothing voice she replies, my name is ANGEL and it is nice to
meet you, with a faint smile and a pounding heart,

I reply, of course it is, I already knew that,
it wouldn't be anything else...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This sounds more like prose, which isn't a criticism, just an observation. I like the story you're telling here, about your momentary meeting in Starbucks -- very relatable. I always prefer a story that has lots of vivid details so we can actually picture the situation in our minds -- yours does that well. The reference to Vietnam is interesting, showing us something about the narrator's age & life experience. I also liked that her name was actually "Angel" . . . nice work.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Papaya]

Sweet and moving poem .

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

What a soothing write James. One of your best of the best. loved the narrative style and I'm just sorry it took so long to come across this beautiful piece.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

You kept this little beauty under your beanie!!

[alf]

Hi James. What a touching poem. I so loved that you gained the courage to speak and actually faced this Angel. I hope we get to hear more about her, she sounds just heavenly!!! You have introduced subtle passion that flows between you words, giving this write some really tender emotions, alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[alf]

I meant it. that is probably the most romantic write I have ever yet seen from you, really a great read, alf

[Melinda McQueen]

Aww how sweet. Was this a one time meeting to be remembered... or....??
:) A nice write.

[Terrence Chang]

Nice one James. I like it

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend, I had fun with this piece! I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[saksham agrawal]

i just become a fan of your writing

[Jamestown]

Thanks a lot! I'm headed to check your work out now! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[saksham agrawal]

I will try my best..!!:)

[Jamestown]

You are talented, keep writing:)

[saksham agrawal]

wow! its just really touching.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[child of God]

Wow what a beautiful write sr I never saw an angel but I did think I heard one talking to me thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read this wonderful write
Broken girl

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[child of God]

No problem sr I love reading your work

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow, such a touching moment! I've had dreams like these and wished they came true. Beautiful description and scene set up. Like the intro of a book or something. Beautiful! And I bet she was too.

[Jamestown]

This came to me , right before bed, pretty cool:) I enjoyed this greatly, for some reason!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!