I Long For You...

Longing 4-U...

I long for you...

I long to see you,
I long to be with you,

To hold you,
To kiss you,
To love you,

I long to take a brisk walk on the beach,
while holding hands and then relax a minute,
and write love letters in the sand,

I desire to be completely in tune with your every need,
and when you're not here my heart bleeds,

I long to get lost in your beautiful blue eyes,
they so much resemble the gorgeous skies,

I know that you desire the same,
so let's quit playing this little game,

I love you you,
and you love me, and as one we're supposed to be,

We make one another better,
we can handle this crazy life together,

So babe, please take my hand and allow me to be your man,
we'll let God handle the rest of the plan...

I long for you,
I want you,
I need you,
and I promise, my love for you is true...

Reviews

[Heromen Selena]

I think your poem out sweeted mine by a lot :P To be honest I like your wording and descriptions better than mine. My personal favorite part of this poem was "I long to take a brisk walk on the beach, while holding hands and then relax a minute, and write love letters in the sand" that paints a beautiful picture of like a couple drawing a heart in the sand with some drift wood or something. It's really serene to think about it. Thank you for the great poem :)

[Jamestown]

Well thank you, but I disagree. I enjoyed yours more, but think about it we are our
Toughest critics, lol! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Wonderful piece James! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out! I haven't seen you lately, what you been up to?

[GreenEyedPoet]

Lots of stuff going on right now, so I haven't spent much time on here.

[Jamestown]

Cool, well nice to see you back, b-blessed!

[Ruth]

Lovely...takes soul to confess the depths of love...sadly most do not...yet this sings volumes xo

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[Solidad]

This reminds me of how my Jon Boy and I fell in love. So this particular piece holds a special place in my h[e]art. Great work.

[Jamestown]

Wow! Thanks for checking it out and I'm honored to find a place in your
heart with poem, b-blessed!

[Double T]

I nearly shed tears while reading this poem. It's so amazing and emotional at the same time. I know I have read a lot of romantic stories, but this is the most meaningful I read since The Notebook. I really like your writing Jamestown. Really, I do because your passion for the Lord means no bounds. And that is something we both have in common. All I could is that I can this poem a 5/5, because it is emotional and meaningful.

[Jamestown]

Thank you, that means so much to me!!! All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[realmwriter]

Awesome wright. If you wrote this for someone you are in love with as sort of a marriage proposal, I hope she says yes.

[Jamestown]

Well thank you and God bless you.

[realmwriter]

You are very welcome.

[wordman]

if your in love, you should be together sharing the moment ,forever

[Jamestown]

Absolutely I agree! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Botania]

A dripping call to woo them all. Well done!

[Botania]

You can be plural, but in singularity here, the charm becomes breathtaking.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Christopher Casper]

I'd love to have this right now. It might sound cliche, but you can have a whole new outlook on life when you have someone special to share it with. When you've got it, just don't take it for granted my friend. Oh and girls with blue eyes drive me crazy me too man. :) Thanks for sharing with me again!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Beautiful and well written poem Jamestown :-) ... glorious love in all its honesty ! I love it

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!