I Long For You...

Longing 4-U...

I long for you...

I long to see you,
I long to be with you,

To hold you,
To kiss you,
To love you,

I long to take a brisk walk on the beach,
while holding hands and then relax a minute,
and write love letters in the sand,

I desire to be completely in tune with your every need,
and when you're not here my heart bleeds,

I long to get lost in your beautiful blue eyes,
they so much resemble the gorgeous skies,

I know that you desire the same,
so let's quit playing this little game,

I love you you,
and you love me, and as one we're supposed to be,

We make one another better,
we can handle this crazy life together,

So babe, please take my hand and allow me to be your man,
we'll let God handle the rest of the plan...

I long for you,
I want you,
I need you,
and I promise, my love for you is true...

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A beautiful yearning Poem Jamestown presented in a touching reaching out format of imagery. Nice work! my friend

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Strong romantic feelings throughout, James. I liked the scattered rhyme in this one. As always, your spirituality comes through loud and clear. A lovely write. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

A beautiful little romantic gem...written so tenderly...almost as if a prayer.
Gorgeous writing James

:) Julie

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

A poem filled with hope and promise.
Romantic piece.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[sereenaoutloud]

This is so romantic and beautiful. It would be great song lyrics!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL

[Terrence Chang]

This kind of reminded of a song Love will keep us alive. Nice one and thumbs up for you

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

your are welcome

[yvo miki]

I enjoyed it so much the poem is beautful

[Jamestown]

I thank you for your kind words, b-blessed!

[yvo miki]

your so welcome and enjoyed

[dipsy]

Nice piece you have there..really enjoyed every bit of it..Thanks for sharing

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

Well written. I see the epitome of romance. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing. :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

My pleasure. :-)

[R Smith]

an excellent and melancholy plea for love to begin, long may it happen for you :)

[Jamestown]

It will in God's time, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!