Keep Your Head Up...

Keep Your head up...

Don't get fed up, I'm telling you,
it's a set up, people will not let up,

It's up to you to do what you have to do,
Keep keepin on, just stay strong, the bs wont last long,

Stand tall, keep your head held high,
show that you have some pride,

Don't let anyone see you frown,
they will pounce and take you down,

Never let them see they got the best of you,
otherwise, you are doomed,

Your happiness is in your hands,
don't let anyone spoil your plans,

People will kick a man when he's down,
not help him up, and that just sucks,

So, hold your ground and never back down,
let everyone know that you're not a clown,

If you do this, you will win life's long race,
keep you're head up and shove it in their face...

Author's Note

This was inspired by HATERS!!!
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

Reviews

[Jennesis]

So I like the strength in this poem. I am wondering though about the grammatical use of you're rather than your in your title and a couple lines. Was that intentional or overlooked? I kept reading along to see if it was purposeful. I wonder if it would flow better with the correct grammar. 'Keep your head up' not you're
Great message though!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for advice, I've been told both now, I appreciate it! Thanks for checking it
out b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

This a class apart inspiration note. Fabulous write James

[Jamestown]

Thanks bro! I appreciate your review, b-blessed.

[Tks]

This is such a classic, gentleman' s reply to all those who try to dethrone him or throw him off balance in life. Much attitude and swagger indeed!

[Jamestown]

Yeah just a little bit, lol! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Blue Sky]

An excellent piece, like the message, and the flow was excellent as well. Well done piece, I really enjoyed reading you too! Thank you for your time to read mine too. Take care!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed. I will keep an eye out for your work as well
Thanks again!

[Black Cat Fever]

Yes, very impressive write. One well worth sharing. You words are strong and inspiring and very very true.
Thanks for sharing this insuring poem.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Black Cat Fever]

You are very welcome. And thanks.

[Frozen Eyes]

It just coincided with my thought "They can only win, if 'I' quit"
very motivating and inspiring lines.. :) thnks for sharing :)

[Jamestown]

Im happy you liked it, weird h how timing is sometimes, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Dara]

This reads so well out loud. It sends a powerful message and one that will stay with me for a long time. Thank you for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jayda Mahabir]

I love this one ... It really shows that you have to be strong.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Cool Girl]

Haha, this was amazing!! It really made me smile :)

[Jamestown]

I love when people smile:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Cool Girl]

Me too :)
You're welcome!

[JC]

Stay strong and keep that motion going forward bro. Dig this.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!