Burnt Soul...

Burnt Soul...

His soul smoldering in an inferno lit life,
flames of sin, ash away unrighteous decisions,

Leaving a crispy soul, to cry black tears of help,
to a GOD, his burnt soul has denied from the beginning of time,

With all bridges completely inflamed,
the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins,
and help to refurbish his hell fire inner being,

With his knee bent and a melted tongue to confess,
his charred soul, will start his upward assent to repairing,
a lava plagued heart,

With his soul completely embers, he reaches for the heavens
and yells, " FREEDOM " and for the first time in his hell bound life,
he feels just that...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BELONGS TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

Reviews

[Randy Barnhart]

Very nice! I love that last verse in particular. Great way to wrap it up. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[XxArmyBratxX]

I can picture your words in my mind. It's absolutely amazing how much depth is in your poetry. The message is beautiful and absolutely true!

[Jamestown]

Well thank you so much for those kind words, I appreciate your review.
B-blessed my new friend!

[child of God]

Beautiful. Work Sr God is good all the time and all the time God is good !!:-)
Broken Girl

[Jamestown]

You got that right! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[child of God]

Life church greating we do that after service I haven't said that in a long time it kinda felt good :-)

[Jamestown]

You are funny, PTL!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Dark soul and simmering embers that don't go away...until
he finds freedom.

[Jamestown]

This was me before giving my life to Christ! I am a completely different person,
thank God! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Quinn]

Fantastic poem - really made me think. Nicely written.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Another beautiful poem. A great feeling of redemption to be freed from the sins that burn our souls. Great work and thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mellow Orange]

I really enjoyed this poem. The way you describe the 'scorched soul' and 'smoldering' really paints a vivid picture and can tell of what we go through and experience in life.

Really well done. :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review. Please let me know when you
put out new work, thanks again and b-blessed!

[Bear]

The taste of even a little freedom on a tormented soul must be heavenly, so nothing is out of reach if one is willing to work for it even if one is held in hell. I like dark poetry because without the darkness how can we truly appreciate the light, thanks for sharing.

[Jamestown]

I thank you for your review, I will be looking forward to more of your work.
B-blessed!

[Double T]

A poem about redemption and mercy: this is a complete masterpiece of good work. I admire u james. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks, I feel the same about you! Hey check out sweet sounds. I appreciate your review!

[Christopher Casper]

We are all brought to our knees in this life. While on our knees we either acknowledge God with acceptance and repent or we turn away and place blame. A powerful message lies in this one.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review and b-blessed!