Burnt Soul...

Burnt Soul...

His soul smoldering in an inferno lit life,
flames of sin, ash away unrighteous decisions,

Leaving a crispy soul, to cry black tears of help,
to a GOD, his burnt soul has denied from the beginning of time,

With all bridges completely inflamed,
the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins,
and help to refurbish his hell fire inner being,

With his knee bent and a melted tongue to confess,
his charred soul, will start his upward assent to repairing,
a lava plagued heart,

With his soul completely embers, he reaches for the heavens
and yells, " FREEDOM " and for the first time in his hell bound life,
he feels just that...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BELONGS TO CHRIST JESUS!!!

Reviews

[success]

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BELONGS TO CHRIST
JESUS!!!....He alone gives FREEDOM

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Praise Jesus!

[Sophy Freebirds]

This poem stole my breath away. I couldn't make up what to say after reading this.i was so overwhelmed with emotion. we all have a burnt soul which has the power to rise from ashes only by the blessings of The Almighty.The problems of world will churn us will break us"we can be defeated but not destroyed". The vivid images you create here of black tears,scorched soul but what stood out was "knees bent"-this phrase told that the main idea of this piece is confession,admitting that we are nothing without him.A writing which opened up my heart. Thank you for sharing :) *keep writing ,God bless you*

~Sophy

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I wish I could tell you the real story behind the inspiration,
Really amazing, ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yes.. Praise be to the Almighty :) was a pleasure reading it

[BlueRibbon]

Thank you for directing me to this poem of yours.

Oh my, the imagery delivered in just this one line
"the scorched soul has no other option but to submit
to his creator and beg for forgiveness of sins, "

Oh man, I fell over in anticipation of just what people could SEE through those words.
You definitely opened up a window into a lot of people's minds, I just hope not too much
flies out haha!

Thank you again, this was truly amazing and inspiring.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[JVirgin5]

The imagery here is truly stupendous. I am impressed with your ability to create such a strong visualization of something that is so difficult to comprehend. God's love is truly a majestic thing and impossible to fathom, but I think your work may help in further understanding it.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind words, I appreciate your review!
Thanks again and b-blessed!

[SmittyJas]

Well Written in praise of our Lord and savior Jesus Christ.

[Jamestown]

Always the praise and glory be to God! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lynn12513]

This poem has really caught my attention. I can really get an image of what's happeneing. It's simply ravishing.

[Jamestown]

I truly thank you for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

Wow,What a great poem James!
Another fine piece of work to God :)
I love it

[Jamestown]

Thanks again my friend and b-blessed!

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

Robust images with a masterful stanzas... I loved the last line...well done

[Jamestown]

Thanks a lot, I'm headed to read your new material, b-blessed!

[ARevenantKingdom [ARK]]

Love the concept, deeply. God's mercy knows no bounds, and we cannot say when it's too late for a sinner to find forgiveness. Your wrap-up was the perfect conclusion, pointing out in a strong, refined yet simple way that true freedom can only be found under God's protection.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, i appreciate your review and b-blessed!

[Shekinah2015]

Good job using such intricate language. This is very inspiring, and a superb match for "Sweet Sounds". Thank you for not giving us a one-sided view of God. His mercy is incredible, but we mustn't forget His judgement either. He is Righteousness!

[Jamestown]

Absolutely, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!