Valentine's Day Cry...

Valentine's Day Cry...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Longing for love...

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Valentine's Day, a wonderful day of joy, love and lust,
Unfortunately for me, just a big bust,
Tears of a longing love, flooding my heart,
it wasn't always like this, I have to restart,
She said "I need to be free"
I felt crushed and very deceived,
After 15 years of pure love,
my wife flew away, just like a dove,
Now all I can do is watch loving couples enjoy this romantic day,
as I sit around humbly broken and pray,
I ask God to please send me the woman of my dreams,
and assure him, I'll do anything by all means,
I look to the sky and let out a violent, Valentine's Day cry,
and plead to have that special someone to love,
hoping he will send her from above,
I know my angel is out there searching for me,
I just wonder where she could be,
All in God's time our hearts will unite,
and when they do, I will hold on tight,
Then I let out a huge sigh ,
and one last Valentine's Day cry...


© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All glory and honor belongs to God!

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Touching piece dear brethren! God has good plans for you. Thanks for sharing this well written poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I know! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Lavender Soya

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :-)
Such a saddening piece...



Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Life goes on, God is good, everything will work out. If you get a chance check out sweet
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This was very deep, while reading it emotions were being stirred up within me. A very good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, and I apologize if I caused you any unwanted emotions,
b-blessed.. read more
I know that feeling all to well my friend. I'm tired of being the third wheel. I'm tired of being the old fallback and the second place option. I'm tired of being told it's none of my business. I'm tired of opening myself up to someone who has no intentions of doing the same, yet still wants you to be there only to hear the drama. I'm tired of knowing the reality that it's all my own fault for still hanging around only to be denied over and over. This gave me the extra push to move on and change this vicious cycle!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I'm with you friend, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Wow. This was very powerful. I, too, felt the same way James. Except I'm not looking for the girl of my dreams. Lol.
I understand how you felt, adn could really connect with you. Don't worry. She's out there. Just enjoy the freedom for a while!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
Keep trundling that hoop. The girl will come along that likes the way you play the game.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

No doubt in God's plan, patients in a virtue! Thanks for checking it out and
b-blessed!
I knew I heard something strange yesterday; it must have been your Valentine cry...

It's time to stop sitting and waiting; you've got to get out there and mingle. God my send you a lady, but He's going to expect you to walk at least halfway to meet her...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Great advice! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Your poetry touches me, James. This is truly remarkably written... You write with so much heart and truth, it just oozes from your poem. I am sure your woman is out there, searching for you as you are her.

Beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, God's plan is perfect, all in due time, no doubt!
B-blessed!
Your poetry is sincere and pure. I feel like it comes from within, as simple as it is. Not a lot of writers can achieve that. I hope that what you said was sincere. I mourn your loss as well. I hope you find a better damsel. Best of luck to you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is truly a sad and beautiful poem with a big heart to it. I love it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Added on February 15, 2015
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