I ♡ Haters...

I♡Haters...

Come all haters, I love you, I need you,
you motivate me, you push me to be what I
want to be,

If I was you, I would hate me too,
I mean, look at you, if I was stuck being you, I'd be
pissed off too,

While your using energy hating me, I'm passing you by
in every facet of life, can't you see,

So please haters, hate away,
what else can I take from you today,

I'm not playing with you, I love you, I need you, I own you,
I just don't ever want to be you,

You show me what not to become,
I refuse to end up a bum,

Honestly, you don't hate me at all,
you were just born without balls,

And if you do have balls, grab those little fellers
and stop hating on me, and make a name for yourself
in society,

Otherwise, I'll be here for you to hate,
and I know you won't make me wait, haters are
never late,

So check yourself, before you wreck yourself,
cause hating on me is bad for you health...

Author's Note

All glory and honor belongs to God!!!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love this piece.
hating takes so much energy away from those who do the hating, but motivates the one who is hated upon...
yes, haters are usually early, aren't they?

jacob

[Jamestown]

Yes they are, first to open the hole in there neck, ha ha! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

James, This was really great. Alot of power in your words. I have learned in time, that the best thing to do with the haters' negative energy is to turn it into something positive and life-changing. For me, it's using that to put into my writing. It seems it's the same way for you. I really love how you called them out, though. Get some balls and stop hating. I really love that.
I found it amazing that within the lines of your poem, there was so much power and emotion.
This was a really great piece of work, and I hope to read more like this from you!
Keep up the fantastic job!

[Frozen Eyes]

I relate so much to this one. I too believe its bcoz of our haters we become who we are. they motivate us to imagine the unachievable and strive to achieve it. You had me interested just and the title and the piece was worth reading. thank you for sharing :)

[Jamestown]

I'm happy you enjoyed it, b-blessed!

[David Scott]

Ha! You have me smiling here. A bit of cliche in a few spots but the overall tone kind of works like the old, "sticks and stones..."
I guess you gotta be you, one way or another... Haters are most definitely going to hate and baiters will always cut bait. ;)
Just had to add my two cents.
Great expression and in touch with pop culture.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed! PTL!

[annawel]

wow great poem. Had to read twice, very good. keep up the good work.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Daniel Whitaker]

Really great writing. I hope I can read more like it.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, and sure can, I won't leave ya hanging, b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Cause the haters gon hate, hate, hate hate... lol I was thinking of Taylor Swift song. Awsome poem... I totally felt the passion behind it and I can relate. Seems like if you are doing people want to keep you down. When you are up people hate even more and want to see you drown.... especially those that are insecure about themselves. Keep pressing on and do you big dawg... all that matters in the end is the Man upstairs :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, gotta love them, b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Interesting poem Jamestown .
Haters are everywhere , glad that they drive you to be better and excel in everything they are not .

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend, I always appreciate your review!

[Roshan Nair]

Nothing drives men more than the loathing of others and his will to prove them wrong. Great work James. liked the style and flow immensely. Was quite fluid to read. Great work again! :) Cheers!

[Jamestown]

Thanks, I appreciate your review, your words are exactly how I feel, thanks again and b-blessed.