I ♡ Haters...

I ♡ Haters...

A Poem by Jamestown
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I ♡ Haters...

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I♡Haters...

Come all haters, I love you, I need you,
you motivate me, you push me to be what I
want to be,

If I was you, I would hate me too,
I mean, look at you, if I was stuck being you, I'd be
pissed off too,

While your using energy hating me, I'm passing you by
in every facet of life, can't you see,

So please haters, hate away,
what else can I take from you today,

I'm not playing with you, I love you, I need you, I own you,
I just don't ever want to be you,

You show me what not to become,
I refuse to end up a bum,

Honestly, you don't hate me at all,
you were just born without balls,

And if you do have balls, grab those little fellers
and stop hating on me, and make a name for yourself
in society,

Otherwise, I'll be here for you to hate,
and I know you won't make me wait, haters are
never late,

So check yourself, before you wreck yourself,
cause hating on me is bad for you health...




© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All glory and honor belongs to God!!!

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this is touchy and wonderful. don't we need that headache. thanks for the nice poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This one I like very much. Lovely message....good poem...


Posted 8 Years Ago


Great write with a great message, my friend...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Great view of how to deal with people who hate and waste energy on the negative. Wonderful piece, as per usual :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Hatred is disguised jealousy, and limits people. Good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree fully, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
RiverRei

9 Years Ago

Hatred can more than just jealousy, but I do agree it limits people.
Acknowledgement is existence, notice the tree fall, witness the decay of dead bird... how the world wills hatred by letting it affect us, tsunamis from a whisper--it seems to grow like a flesh eating fungus. By what I read of your fiery words, you let it be known loudly - their hateful words has no power to hurt... the rhythm was a speeding locomotive, passionate, direct, and powerful, and as it steadily reached its destination, it trickled abit like departing passenger returning to the normalcy in a crazy way... Great read, keep hope alive, right? Namaste.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks a ton and I will definitely be back to view more of your work
you obviously are a gift.. read more
Butch Decatoria

9 Years Ago

Practice makes perfect, and if you love what you do ... etc. You know, you kind of remind me of Emin.. read more
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I have battled several times, always fun till someone gets hurt:(
"While your using energy hating me, I'm passing you by
in every facet of life, can't you see" - This line strongly motivates me.
Your writing is so well expressed that I could feel every bit of it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
truly said.. well expressed. haters criticism is really imp if u wanna grow..
i am beginning to like your work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again and b-blessed!
Powerful and honest words.
"And if you do have balls, grab those little fellers
and stop hating on me, and make a name for yourself
in society, "
You couldn't have said it better. If I don't like a poem. ( I don't like racism, hate, vulgar or abuse) I will stop reading and I won't comment. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and opinions. I liked them.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I'm in agreement! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. I tell people. Don't be offended. Don't read.
I love this! Well written. The second verse was my favorite. It says what I want to say but only think. Very good. Keep up the great work Jamestown.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Twiztid Poetess

9 Years Ago

Your welcome.

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