Dream Land...

Fantasy, Fun, Adventure...

Dream Land...

Come on and follow me, let's slip away for awhile to dream land,
let's just take off with no set plan,

Let's leave our worries and problems behind,
and escape and enjoy our creative minds,

Let's do all the stuff we've always wanted to do,
it's dream land, it's completely up to you,

We can travel to far away lands,
and spend a hundred grand,

We could pretend, we're at the top of the world's tallest mountain,
or in Rome, embracing at the famous love fountain,

What about making love at some secluded tropical island,
maybe tucked away somewhere in Thailand,

Or fly a spaceship to Mars, and get a close-up
at the moon and the stars,

Wow, what about floating to heaven and visiting God,
and the rest of the brethren,

All of it sounds completely awesome!!!

Honestly, I don't care what we do or where we go in dream land,
just as long as you're present and holding my hand...

Reviews

[R Smith]

thanks for the invite Jamestown but is it ok if i bring my own partner along, she's better looking than you lol, just joking, seriously my friend what a treat it could be to do all those wonderful things, if i could choose one i'd take the trip to heaven, i have a passion for the idea but it might have to wait a while :)

[Jamestown]

I agree with you completely! We will be there soon enough, praise God!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

[Afraa]

Damn, you are quite the charmer, James! Is it possible to pull off a rhyming scheme more than this one? This read was tons of fun, and was refreshing to the eyes. These kinds of poems seem to be your specialty, my friend. There are no words to describe this work of art. What else is going through that mind of yours?

You are a true poet.

Thank you for sharing! And... going onto my favorites!

[Jamestown]

You rock:)

[armin]

woe, will love to visit that dreamland.
The poem ended very wisely .I loved the rhyming scheme and wordings were really mind blowing my friend.
I couldn't select my best part ,the whole write was well crafted.
Keep it coming.

Spidey. ...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, you are very kind, b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

Awwe. this one's too cute dear brethren! :-) A good read, it'll be lovely to put some melody on this. Kudos!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I thank you for always being so supportive, b-blessed!

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome. :-) It's good to give back since you are supportive to me as well :-)