Dream Land...

Fantasy, Fun, Adventure...

Dream Land...

Come on and follow me, let's slip away for awhile to dream land,
let's just take off with no set plan,

Let's leave our worries and problems behind,
and escape and enjoy our creative minds,

Let's do all the stuff we've always wanted to do,
it's dream land, it's completely up to you,

We can travel to far away lands,
and spend a hundred grand,

We could pretend, we're at the top of the world's tallest mountain,
or in Rome, embracing at the famous love fountain,

What about making love at some secluded tropical island,
maybe tucked away somewhere in Thailand,

Or fly a spaceship to Mars, and get a close-up
at the moon and the stars,

Wow, what about floating to heaven and visiting God,
and the rest of the brethren,

All of it sounds completely awesome!!!

Honestly, I don't care what we do or where we go in dream land,
just as long as you're present and holding my hand...

Reviews

[R Smith]

thanks for the invite Jamestown but is it ok if i bring my own partner along, she's better looking than you lol, just joking, seriously my friend what a treat it could be to do all those wonderful things, if i could choose one i'd take the trip to heaven, i have a passion for the idea but it might have to wait a while :)

[Jamestown]

I agree with you completely! We will be there soon enough, praise God!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

[Michelle Gent]

James so light and cheerful
A feel good poem.
Thank you for lifting me up

[Jamestown]

My pleasure, if I can make one person feel good, mission accomplished, thanks for
checking it out and be blessed!

[Michelle Gent]

You as well. Thank you.

[Raches]

A lovely, nostalgic poem. I feel so trapped here at times that I want to escape into this dreamland:)

[Dhaye]

Fantastic. I am a dreamer, too. I like this one, James. Great piece. Keep it up!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out!

[~]

A dreamy poem lined up with darling imagery and fun places to visit. Well done!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Tks]

Yes! Finally, a poem which so aptly describes the wonders of the imagination...the limitless thoughts that float into our heads during the day. The rhyme scheme employed here, namely ab ab ab structure, is very catchily employed by yourself, such that it appears that you have woven a seamless tapestry of words. An interesting read, James!
P.S. Absolutely adored your last stanza:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Pure fun and inviting poem Jamestown . I enjoy it .
Dream land is the number one destination ! Thank you for sharing :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out my friend, I appreciate it and I pray you can get
to your dream land, b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

Awesome job James, The dream land... where everything comes true
A good poem!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[Terrence Chang]

Nice one Mr James. I really like your work

[Jamestown]

Thanks my brother, i appreciate it. I hope your day has been blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

You are welcome

[Fran Marie]

Ah, beautiful thoughts abound in a wondrous dream land..nice work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!