The Perfect Package...

The Perfect Package...

A Poem by Jamestown
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That Special Someone...

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The Perfect Package...

To see you smile, is to view the glorious sun coming over top
the Rocky Mountains, so beautiful and pristine,

Your walk so elegant, is that of an angel gliding upon
the earth,

To gaze upon your eyes, is to peer into a glistening
lake bed, ravishing blues that glow with the suns reflection,

Your skin to the touch, is like dragging my hands across a
fresh set of silk sheets,

To kiss you, is that of paradise, your lips as soft & sweet,
as two marshmallows,

And with all of this physical beauty, this is not the reason,
I find you irresistible,

Your brilliant mind that resembles, that of a waterfall spilling
endless knowledge,

Your heart, that is pure as a diamond tucked away in a hidden cave,
somewhere in the Himalayas,

And your untarnished soul, that has been sent to me straight
from God himself,

You are physically, mentally, and emotionally,
the most beautiful woman, I have ever laid my eyes on,

You are " The Perfect Package" ... I♥U!!!

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!!!

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Wow!
Its not always that a man loves a woman for the person she is.
The stanzas which followed after 'And yet...', clearly brought this fact to the forefront that you fall in love with the being!
Nicely done Jamestown!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I try to treat people the way I would like be treated, b-blessed!
To see you smile, is to view the glorious sun coming over top
And a glorious start to that lovely poem.
I loved it except the last line perfect package, I don't think it suits to admire a woman's beauty.
But otherwise a good read.

Spidey. ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I really appreciate it!

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Jamestown
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Denver, CO



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