The Perfect Package...

That Special Someone...

The Perfect Package...

To see you smile, is to view the glorious sun coming over top
the Rocky Mountains, so beautiful and pristine,

Your walk so elegant, is that of an angel gliding upon
the earth,

To gaze upon your eyes, is to peer into a glistening
lake bed, ravishing blues that glow with the suns reflection,

Your skin to the touch, is like dragging my hands across a
fresh set of silk sheets,

To kiss you, is that of paradise, your lips as soft & sweet,
as two marshmallows,

And with all of this physical beauty, this is not the reason,
I find you irresistible,

Your brilliant mind that resembles, that of a waterfall spilling
endless knowledge,

Your heart, that is pure as a diamond tucked away in a hidden cave,
somewhere in the Himalayas,

And your untarnished soul, that has been sent to me straight
from God himself,

You are physically, mentally, and emotionally,
the most beautiful woman, I have ever laid my eyes on,

You are " The Perfect Package" ... I♥U!!!

Author's Note

All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!!!

Reviews

[R Smith]

great memory here for me, I once knew such a woman, sadly no longer, it makes me believe you do know someone like this now, so best wishes to you and her, very good poem my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, i appreciate it and your words are so kind, b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

Why Jamestown I didn't realize you knew my wife?Really great poem again and its nice to see love isn't and never should be based on physical attraction.Glory to God for this write brother

[Jamestown]

To funny! I would take a beautiful soul over pretty face any day, thanks for review, PTL!

[W R Stowe]

Good answer God bless

[Lavender Soya]

True, it this one's and uplifting piece. Well written! I like the descriptive style.

Suggestion:
3rd stanza - To gaze upon you're eyes, ----- I think you meant "your" instead of "you're". :-)

[Jamestown]

Yep you are right, thanks and I appreciate your review, b-blessed

[Lavender Soya]

You're very much welcome :-)

[Lizardo]

Awesome piece of work you have here, I do like it a lot!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed

[AaronFreitas]

Another great piece James. It was really lifting and the descriptions were amazing. Good work

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!

[Roshan Nair]

Great work again James. Lovely flow to it, it plays out almost like a great country song lyric in my head...brilliant words and description for love . Cheers!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I had run with it, b-blessed

[An owl on the moon]

So lifting.. so loving.. and how you recognize the wonder of her is a blessing from God... Beautiful!!

[Jamestown]

Always God, first! Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Tiana]

Absolutely beautiful, James :) The perfect poem for your perfect package ... wonderfully written ...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Magnificent portrayal of a special woman Jamestown . Very nice poem .
When you found that special someone you'd chase her to the end of the earth !
Thank you for sharing

[Jamestown]

Thanks Mary, you are very kind, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!

[H. E. Schreiter]

That is beautiful! The imagery you created is magnificent! Very well written Jamestown!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it, b-blessed.