The Perfect Package...

That Special Someone...

The Perfect Package...

To see you smile, is to view the glorious sun coming over top
the Rocky Mountains, so beautiful and pristine,

Your walk so elegant, is that of an angel gliding upon
the earth,

To gaze upon your eyes, is to peer into a glistening
lake bed, ravishing blues that glow with the suns reflection,

Your skin to the touch, is like dragging my hands across a
fresh set of silk sheets,

To kiss you, is that of paradise, your lips as soft & sweet,
as two marshmallows,

And with all of this physical beauty, this is not the reason,
I find you irresistible,

Your brilliant mind that resembles, that of a waterfall spilling
endless knowledge,

Your heart, that is pure as a diamond tucked away in a hidden cave,
somewhere in the Himalayas,

And your untarnished soul, that has been sent to me straight
from God himself,

You are physically, mentally, and emotionally,
the most beautiful woman, I have ever laid my eyes on,

You are " The Perfect Package" ... I♥U!!!

Author's Note

All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!!!

Reviews

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Wow, James, great use of metaphor and simile to get this point across. Gosh darn it man, what a woman this must be!!

Your untarnished soul..." - fabulous image of God's perfection...

"You are physically, mentally, and emotionally,/the most beautiful woman, I have ever laid eyes on," - moulded from perfection...

What a tremendous write. I enjoyed this look at how this woman moves you to write. I am going to stop now instead of continuing to blubber.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I have not met her yet but I know she is out there
I am in constant prayer and she floods my dreams, all in due time:)

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If she's in your head, my friend, then she is indeed out there. I pray you find her! :)

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

I read a fabulous quote and it went something like this...

There is nothing more sexy than having a great conversation with an intelligent mind...

I agree, totally...

...as true beauty radiates from the inside out...

Alisa ;-)

[Jamestown]

I agree, thanks for review and b-blessed!

[Dhaye]

Wow! So sweet. Perfect for this Valentine's Day for your special someone. Hope she can read this.
Excellent lines! Keep it up.

[Jamestown]

You are so kind friend, thanks for checking it out! PTL!

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[MOON]

Beautiful write and tribute , go well.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Very romantic one.
The way you penned your "Perfect package" sounds perfectly perfect for the perfect girl's perfect dream man's way to appreciate her.. oops thats too much perfection!
But I liked the way you painted her picture. its wonderful :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks again, I so appreciate the fact that you enjoy my work, I have a really
big piece im working on now called the sweet sounds, maybe you would like to assist, let me know?

[Frozen Eyes]

Definitely would be happy to be of any help :) Let me know :)

[Jamestown]

Ok, I'll hit you up this evening! B-blessed!

[David Scott]

Just in time for Valentines day. :)
Im sure it was perfectly received.
Lucky lady.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Tks]

A very moving piece straight from the depths of your heart, James. I likr your attempts to paint similarities to Nature...after all, we all came from Nature, from God's very own garden...and by comparing her to the Lord's creations, you have done a marvellous job in praising the Lord:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, PTL!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

My goodness. If I didn't know any better, I'd say you are in love. This is beautiful! I'm a bit jealous! With that being said, it was a fantastic write! Good Job!

[Justin Xavier Smith]

Reminded me a lot of the perfect woman in my life. Although I think some of the metaphors & images you use are a little cliched or forced, the sentiment is nice.

[Jamestown]

Thank you, I will keep working on it for sure. One of these will be up to par.
Thanks for checking it out,, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!