The Shining Sun...

Romans-12:10 Be devoted to one another in brotherly love. Honor one another above yourselves...

As the bright beautiful shining sun rises in the morning,
we to follow suit,
This blazing ball of gas is so important to our existence,
without the amazing sun we would not be able to do anything,
life as we know it, would be no more.

This gorgeous sun of ours, is used as a massive power source/light
for the earth our home,
I too feel like, I need to be a massive power source/light for my brothers
and sisters of earth,

By absorbing the suns powerful positive energy we are
capable to live our lives as we do,
Unfortunately not all of our brothers and sisters have the same means
to do so,

This wonderful sun of ours, is a gift from God that keeps on giving,
I believe we should recycle this positive energy and help
our fellow man,

By taking this positive energy and doing something positive,
for someone else, besides family, friends, or yourself,
could make a huge difference in one of our fellow mans life,

To think of someone else, rather then yourself is difficult,
but not at all impossible,
It's the right thing to do!!!

So, I challenge you to do something for your fellow man today,
recycle the suns powerful positive energy, give back what God gave
us, honor someone besides yourself,

Today, you become someone's bright, beautiful, shining sun...

Author's Note

All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!!!
Romans-12:10...

Reviews

[Ishita Dixit]

Today, you become someone's bright, beautiful, shinning, sun...

Loved these lines. Very inspirational.

[Jamestown]

Thanks, I appreciate your review, b-blessed.

[Justin Xavier Smith]

I'm not sure I could even qualify this as a poem. It feels more like a sermon. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but it starts off as just a list of facts about the sun. Nothing particularly well-written or interesting, and at a certain point it feels like I'm just attending a 5th grade science class with a very enthusiastic teacher.

Then it changes, and it starts being about God and goodness and being good to each other. Which is a great message, and one that I think is important to put out there, but I can't say that the writing is very evocative or persuasive.

[Justin Xavier Smith]

Also, you accidentally spelled "Shining" as "shinning" in the title

[Jamestown]

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it, b-blessed.

[Terrence Chang]

Fabulous writing. Simple yet breathtaking. Good description

[Jamestown]

Thanks again, I appreciate my brother, PTL!

[Terrence Chang]

You are welcome