The Shining Sun...

The Shining Sun...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Romans-12:10 Be devoted to one another in brotherly love. Honor one another above yourselves...

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As the bright beautiful shining sun rises in the morning,
we to follow suit,
This blazing ball of gas is so important to our existence,
without the amazing sun we would not be able to do anything,
life as we know it, would be no more.

This gorgeous sun of ours, is used as a massive power source/light
for the earth our home,
I too feel like, I need to be a massive power source/light for my brothers
and sisters of earth,

By absorbing the suns powerful positive energy we are
capable to live our lives as we do,
Unfortunately not all of our brothers and sisters have the same means
to do so,

This wonderful sun of ours, is a gift from God that keeps on giving,
I believe we should recycle this positive energy and help
our fellow man,

By taking this positive energy and doing something positive,
for someone else, besides family, friends, or yourself,
could make a huge difference in one of our fellow mans life,

To think of someone else, rather then yourself is difficult,
but not at all impossible,
It's the right thing to do!!!

So, I challenge you to do something for your fellow man today,
recycle the suns powerful positive energy, give back what God gave
us, honor someone besides yourself,

Today, you become someone's bright, beautiful, shining sun...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus!!!
Romans-12:10...

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The very first poem with a positive vibe that I've read on this site, ever since I joined three years ago. Personally, and regrettably, not my style of writing; I'm the dark and pessimistic type. You aspire and inspire us Sir. Beautiful words. Nothing ostentatious. Enough to deliver a strong message. What you did was very hard! Keep up the great vibe. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Very Uplifting with a positive message. Enjoyed ! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A sunlit inspirational writing that strikes a chord in many people and really holds a lot of meaning on each phrase. It addresses the bright side of optimism that encourages people to try to do something new or even just help out someone who may need a small bit of motivation. Thank you for sharing, that made me smile. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out,
Very true where would we be without the sun?
Very intriguing "be like the sun"
Very motivating "recycle the suns powerful positive energy, give back what God gave
us, honor someone besides yourself"
Awesome write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks, l try:)
Uplifting and laudable.
Yours is a poetic ministry, Jamestown.
Go forth, young man!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, and b-blessed!
Such a positive vibe to this, I love it! Good job. :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

God is so good, why not be positive! Check out my pieces,
peace, and hate, they are both real.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

I will go look for them and check 'em out. :]
James,
this piece was very beautiful. I agree, if we all could just be positive, it could change the world! Fantastic work!
Now, where have you been??

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thanks for sharing brethren! I feel the positive energy. :-) Great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!PTL!
Lavender Soya

9 Years Ago

My pleasure ^^,
thank you for this inspirational work, you send us out to help each other, i appreciate that :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed
A great inspirational poem, James :) A delightful read this morning ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate and have a blessed day!

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Jamestown

Denver, CO



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