Planet Lust...

Thoughts of a sexual voyage...

As the atmosphere puddled with infinite stars,
constellations forming dot to dot imagery,
a meteor shower of thoughts, shoot through
my skull,

All leading my sexually perverse mind to take a,
rocket ship to planet lust, with a galaxy of pleasant,
fantasies riding shotgun,


In continual thoughts of when, I will be graced
with her elegant and stimulating beauty,
and presence, the ever elusive thoughts and images,
of rubbing her flawless skin and licking every inch of her
gorgeous body playing ping pong in my dome,

These thoughts causing my male anatomy,
to pulse like the sun radiating heat to earth,
and a longing for her as if time has come to a complete stop,

With a burning desire to call and confess my feelings,
I don't want to wake her from the blissful sleep upon the stars
I'm imagining her on,

I will enjoy these thoughts and images, but it's probably
a good time to head back to earth, for a cold shower and
milky way...

Author's Note

Planet lust, fun writing, about a lady friend...

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

stellar poem...i love the ethereal yet sensual imagery your words weaved
through-out this write...simply beautiful...thank you for sharing :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review.

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome :)

[Terrence Chang]

Fantastic wit Mr James especially the part of ping pong in my dome.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it, b-blessed.

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome I am reading all of your works

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome poem... very enjoyable read. I loved the way you ended it "I will enjoy these thoughts and images, but it's probably a good time to head back to earth, for a cold shower and milky way..." Very good work.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, PTL!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, and of course we end up in that cold shower thinking to ourselves. 'wow, what was that?"

a sensual journey written well, here.

[Jamestown]

Thanks, I thought I better end there, ha ha, thanks for checking it out

[Lavender Soya]

Very well penned brethren! In amazing to note how all of the fancy words were stringed together. Bravo!

[Jamestown]

Thanks so much,i appreciate it, PTL!

[Tiana]

Beautiful poem, James ... I enjoyed from start to finish ... :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it, b-blessed!

[Tiana]

always my pleasure, James ... Be-Blessed :)

[W R Stowe]

Cold shower indeed,but they don't seem to work in my experience.But is it lust when I imagine about my wife?My heart of lust is consumed by only her,if sinful Lord forgive me but I love her immensely.You have showed another creative side of you nice work.God bless bro

[Jamestown]

Thanks my brother, just trying new stuff, Thanks for checking it out, i appreciate it
b-blessed.

[W R Stowe]

Your welcome! Did you ever see Christ"s Agony? check out Abyss of Betrayal that was being creative God bless

[Jamestown]

Christ agony yes, other one no, PTL!

[W R Stowe]

Did you give review? guess will check don"t forget Letter from her soldier