Planet Lust...

Thoughts of a sexual voyage...

As the atmosphere puddled with infinite stars,
constellations forming dot to dot imagery,
a meteor shower of thoughts, shoot through
my skull,

All leading my sexually perverse mind to take a,
rocket ship to planet lust, with a galaxy of pleasant,
fantasies riding shotgun,


In continual thoughts of when, I will be graced
with her elegant and stimulating beauty,
and presence, the ever elusive thoughts and images,
of rubbing her flawless skin and licking every inch of her
gorgeous body playing ping pong in my dome,

These thoughts causing my male anatomy,
to pulse like the sun radiating heat to earth,
and a longing for her as if time has come to a complete stop,

With a burning desire to call and confess my feelings,
I don't want to wake her from the blissful sleep upon the stars
I'm imagining her on,

I will enjoy these thoughts and images, but it's probably
a good time to head back to earth, for a cold shower and
milky way...

Author's Note

Planet lust, fun writing, about a lady friend...

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

If a young man were not, from time to time, overwhelmed by such thoughts, he would neither be young nor a man.
An honest and colorful poetic account, Jamestown!

[Jamestown]

I agree completely, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[I Am Svetlana]

I'm glad I'm not the only one who wishes to call someone whenever we think of them. I thought I was alone on that one! Anyway, I'm blown away by this (as with your writing in general) and how you went into depth as you described things. It's not easy to write such erotic pieces and have them turn out beautifully! I've wanted to write more erotic (I've written some here and there), but the ones I think of nowadays I feel would be so simple, so...stuff they've already heard or read before. I'm normally not one to think about simple stuff like that, but it does have a knack to drill into my mind sometimes.

[Jamestown]

Yeah it floats in and out of my head as well, thanks for your review, b-blessed!

[FateDictates]

gorgeous body playing ping pong in my dome, ' and 'back to earth, for a cold shower and
milky way...' loved these lines - they left me smiling...curtsy bow

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Frank]

Lust, long for the softness of a woman, to touch and be touched all part of God's plan. It's not evil to love and be loved, context is important, not to love and run away, that is better.

God never runs away, we should honour relationships, and the result of relationships. To kill an unwanted or unplanned fetus now that is evil.

Controlling our feelings and emotions, important, all men should marry, and then stick to one wife. The torture is our eyes and our feeble feelings. They need control and discipline. Easy to speak about far more difficult to live.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely, thanks for the review, and b-blessed!

[Christopher Casper]

This has some very erotic and intense imagery. A woman's body is truly a universe of it's own. There's so much to do and discover. It never gets tiresome as each encounter can bring about a new revelation. Very nice my friend.

[Jamestown]

You said it! Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Tai Ryens]

Quite the erotic piece, and I must say that connecting these thoughts of yours to the great expanse of the universe is a unique spin to the usual presentation of these thoughts that seem to linger around within your mind for quite a bit of time afterwards. A second reading, and I'm even asking myself whether you gawked at the exquisite skin of her body or the universe for what it is; whether this is a piece comparing the beauty of her in that one moment to the awe-inspiring universe, or comparing the measly universe to someone like her.

Spectacular.

[Jamestown]

Your review is much appreciated, I think you truly understood why I
chose to go with the galaxy/universe theme, thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!

[Angi]

Ha! Oh my. Oh My. The ending almost, almost has me blushing. I must confess, when I clicked on this, I thought it would be just another dirty, dirty ditty. The language you used (particularly the opening paragraph) is really quite good. I enjoyed this so much. I am left wondering if the Narrator's partner would have enjoyed it even more if he would have given her a nudge.

Nice. Angi~

[Jamestown]

I am so pleased that you enjoyed this, I had fun with it! I was going to end strong, but
then remembered there are youngsters that I have an obligation to, thanks.

[Angi]

I think you are a smart writer to have left us dangling, so to speak.

[Jamestown]

I appreciate it, don't give me to much credit, I did think about it, lol!

[ANTO]

This is a different side to you JT. I like the 'hot bubblegum' tone of the thing - playful and not lewd and with so many lol moments
The ending is very very witty - especially the wilky way - great fun
Thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks a lot for checking it out, I had fun with it, I appreciate your review, b-blessed.

[MsJewel]

There is a fine line between erotic/sensual and pornographic. You have written a sensual little gem, full of passion without crossing that line (which I appreciate). Love the imagery, the feeling, the passion and then adding a bit of humor at the end which made it even more enjoyable. A stunning poem Jamestown!

:) Julie

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I'm glad you liked and enjoyed, b-blessed.

[Afraa]

I am not accustomed to reading erotic poems on here, but I am glad I came upon this one. I do not think it's possible to word lust better than this. You did an impressive job on this, Jamestown. My jaw dropped at the beauty of these unworldly words. For sure, this would flatter any lady out there.

You did a damn good job wrapping up the piece, and it did make me laugh.

Thank you for sharing such an amorous piece.

[Jamestown]

Thanks a lot, I truly appreciate it. You are one of my favorites for sure and reading
this review makes me extremely happy, I certainly didn't want to go overboard and very
happy you laughed, b-blessed, PTL!

[Afraa]

Whoa, I am one of your favorites???
I did not know that, but I am truly honored... thank you!