Talking Walls...

Talking Walls...

A Poem by Jamestown
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If the walls could talk, what would they say?

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Talking Walls...

If the walls could talk, what would they say?

Would there be may people shocked and dismayed,
would friends&family, feel as if they've been played,

Or would people still view you, just as you are,
still with the image of you as a shinning star,

I see several people, wearing abundant masks,
and that is the sole purpose, why I ask,

Some people are as fake as they come,
they lie, cheat, and steal, and think we're just dumb,

In this day and age, peeps aren't what they seem,
they do and say things, because of low self-esteem,
there selfish, manipulating, hypocrites and down right mean,

So if you are one of these mean peeps,
you should be ashamed, with nobody but yourself to blame,
eventually, one of those masks will slip off and
life as you know it, will come to an abrupt STOP!

And if you're the shinning star we all think you are,
then, THANK YOU! at least there's still a few that stand true,

The truth always comes out in the wash, so stay true to yourself
and avoid becoming lost...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All glory and honor belongs to God!

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That Was Really Something To Think About.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!
Talking walls, a lovely analogy showcasing the concept of an omniscient deity that can hear and see everything that is done, even when the person of interest is unable to observe. Well said, Jamestown.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed!
Undecided Jessica

9 Years Ago

Check up more of my work soon!
Good say. We do not need walls to talk, wafts of wind and time can say a lot about anyone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree, thanks for checking it out.
Awesome write James. You have hit home with this one. Very powerful. Yes, the world is overflowing with people who wear masks. Eventually, the truth will come out out, the masks will come off. Then the world will either be our best friend our our worst enemy depending on what we are from inside :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

See this everyday, thanks for checking it out.
If walls could talk...scary thought for anyone. We all have bad days and say things in hurt and pain we don't always mean.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Absolutely, some more than others, thanks for checking it out.
Excellent questioning and answering. So much truth in your write. I liked evey line. Bravo, sir. B blessed...:)....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I appreciate you checking it out, PTL!
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Muchly welcome...:).........
Imagine if walls could talk? wow! All the secrets it would reveal ... Wonderful poem that delivers such sage advice ... Way to go, James :) I enjoyed it a lot :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, b-blessed
Your sentiments were clearly evident. Great message!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for nice review, PTL!
Advice hard to argue with, J.
Enjoyed what you had to say--and how you said it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, many masks make me laugh. B blessed.
If I can't be me then I can't be free.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree fully, with your comment, Thanks for checking it out.

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Added on February 6, 2015
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Jamestown
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