Cold Heart...

Evil Women...

Cold Heart...

A cold heart, with a aching desire to seek and destroy,
the purpose to find a male mate and devour,
to completely lie, manipulate and rip her prey to shreds,
leaving him to, rebuild a shattered heart,

The freezing effect of a "I don't give a f--k" attitude,
and a chilling look of hatred, is where it starts,

She is the epitome of pure evil, cold blood running through her veins,
lurching in the shadows, on the hunt for her next victim,
all while, playing the part of sweet and innocent,
an angelic frame to sell the fake,

A kiss so cold, that a hot blooded male would retain
chapped lips, always on the prowl searching to unleash the next blizzard,
releasing black ice all over the roadways of life, causing deadly fate to
a cure,

If you feel this overwhelming chill set in, run toward the sun,
and pray, because no man alive deserves to be frost bitten,
CAUTION: Frozen roads ahead...

WARNING SIGNS:
.Sleeps cold (cold to the touch)
.Icicle tears
.Always in the dark (dark demeanor)
.Constant negativity
.Know it all
.My ex-wife...

Author's Note

Pure evil and on the prowl...
Sad but true...

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A very chilly piece with vivid images and great metaphors used..very descripted of a cold heart indeed an apt title...well done

[Jamestown]

Thanks, doing something different. I appreciate you checking it out.

[rudelizard]

Brutally honest and bursting with raw emotion. Fantastic work my friend. This is one of my favorite pieces from you.

[Jamestown]

Thanks man, I don't show this side often for obvious reasons, but I wanted to show a
different side, b-blessed.

[rudelizard]

I totally understand the vulnerability and commend you for opening up. There's some therapeutic justice to it. Keep up the great work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks again!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Wow James, this poem was really good. It showed the dark side of you, that we rarely get to see. I'm sorry you were done wrong by her, but there ae good girls out there. Where ya been? We haven't talked in forever?!

Well done on the piece, by the way!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most bleak and disruptive piece, fabulous! well done, good read.

[Jamestown]

Thanks again, with a complement from such talent, I'm honored!

[Mary Bradley]

Full of resentment and anger Poem ... it's quite chilling I find . But it does happen a lot that beautiful love could turn bad and hurtful .
Thank you for sharing .

[Jamestown]

Yes, I was really just trying to show a different side of writing and let off some steam,
unfortunately, you are correct these things happen to both parties, male and female:(

[Mary Bradley]

I hope you are feeling better and may the changes bring you more happiness somehow

[Jamestown]

Yes, doing great, thanks you are to kind:)

[Aayushi]

There is agony in every word but no one is entirely evil or entirely good. Humans are the mixture of both it is only when there is love our heart ignores the evil in the other person and as the love fades our visions get clear and we see the evil, sometimes it is simply not acceptable and there, the relationships fall apart.

A well expressed piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate it!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Good use of metaphors, I can feel angst in the lines which gives your poem a personal unique perspective. Keep writing!

Regards,

Al

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out

[Alfred Kukitz]

My pleasure you are a good writer. I'll keep my eye out for you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like this poem.

WARNING SIGNS:
".Sleeps cold (cold to the touch)
.Icicle tears
.Always in the dark (dark demeanor)
.Constant negativity
.Know it all
.My ex-wife..."
Ex-wife can leave bad taste in mouth and in living. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Made me smile and laugh this early morning.
Coyote

[Ishita Dixit]

This was quite personal. Very bold of you to share. In a chilling manner you described the evil. Great job Jamestown!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, just trying to show different side of writing, PTL!

[Ishita Dixit]

You're welcome!

[ANTO]

This is truly powerful stuff JT. Its true that there are evil women out there and evil men. We need to be careful not to let such people into our lives to begin with but they have so many tricks that they employ - its easy to be fooled by them only to discover their true nature when we are deeply involved and caught in their web of untruths and evil. You wrote the manual here on vetting people who wish to gain access to our lives like to wreak havoc. Bravo JT

[Jamestown]

Thanks man, I agree there is evil from both sides and I can't stand those jerks, they
mess it up for the good guys, showing different writing style.