Do you remember. ..

Do you remember. ..

A Poem by Jamestown
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Remembering the good times...

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Do you remember the time,
our eyes first meet and locked, almost as if to say "I'm in love" (love@first sight)

Or our first date, walking hand n hand through the glorious evergreen mountains,
then enjoying, a wine and cheese picnic and carving sweet nothings,
into a fabulous old oak tree, "James&-----,

Do you remember, our first delicious sweet kiss,
which caused both to take a deep breath and goose bumps,
and a childish giggle that followed,

Or the day, we both confessed our love for one another, while
staring deep into each other's eyes and a warm, loving, embrace,

Or what about the first time we made love, and you
whispering in my ear "I didn't realize that this could feel so good"
while tears leaked from your crystal green eye's

Do you remember these beautiful moments of love,
we shared together, because I can't and won't ever forget,

I truly pray, you hold them in your heart for safe keeping,
these are unbelievable memories, that I will always cherish,

These were times of pure love and happiness, a sliver of heaven,
I thank you and will always love you...

James♥-----
4-ever!

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
Remembering the good times...
All glory and honor belongs to God!

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This piece is lovely. I really enjoyed the positive, uplifting feel! Keep up the good work. =]

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and review, I appreciate it, b-blessed.
A beautiful poem for the want and need of love.
"These were times of pure love and happiness, a sliver of heaven,
I thank you and will always love you..."
The good days are needed to be remembered to ensure the new days are the same. Need to keep our number two content and happy till our last day together. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


the sweet, romantic memories that you chose to highlight and the beautiful way you penned it make this one tug on those heartstrings in such an enchanting way.. It felt so light and heavenly indeed... "a sliver of heaven".. nicely done.. love the ending..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks, please check out enough is enough, I would love your feedback, thanks again.
Ah yes a walk down memory lane I wrote one jut today about that but (meet should of been met being past tense)This Gem by the way I read 4 my prayer poems perhaps the author would help

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again, I appreciate it
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

To the Glory of God your welcome
This is a very beautiful piece full of romance and affection. I really like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is something I have tried to capture in my own words
you captured it perfectly

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Well thank you and know I'm going to check you work out right now, thanks for review.
Every woman wants to be loved like this.
You have captured the first moments so beautifully.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautifully penned piece of poetry here..memories of young love so nice to hold on to indeed..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, yeah I'm trying to do a couple different things, b-blessed.

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Jamestown

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